I Say Your Name

Mum Third Anniversary 1st Feb.

there will be no mourning
only gratitude for memories
placed with flora in glass vases
cream tea roses and pink carnations
while on the mantle there will be
white candles scented
effusing bouquets of jasmine love

my mind will carry my heart
in thought flight to the west country
where the tides embrace Anstey’s Cove
and kiss the feet at Thatcher’s Rock
wild water washing away
the last days of suffering, leaving
images of you smiling and waving

Reviews

[nj coleman]

I envision the writer, sullen and alone, in a big chair by a fire, cat or dog by their feet, gazing out on a cold, snowy night. The house held loved ones and laughter and now only the love remains.
I hope this was written from inspiration and not experience.
Beautifully written Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Hi n j. Many thanks for stopping by. Ha, my house is a riot of noise with lots of young people living with me. Sometimes I wish for the chair infront of the fire on my own:) The loss though, is one of experience. I appreciate your thoughts. All good wishes.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for your mother. I lost my sister two years ago. She had the Willow trees near. I go to them and I remember her smile, her laughter. Thank you dear Chris for sharing the amazing poetry about your dear mother.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Coyote for also sharing your sister with me. So hard when we lose such loved people from our lives. The willow trees are a nice place to go to remember. Pleased you enjoyed my poem, it means a lot. Especially this poem. Have a great day my friend.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Chris. We must remember the people, who loved us.

[Chris Shaw]

We must indeed. Have a good day Coyote.

[Amy R]

Magnificent write, again with the beautiful imagery.
The poem juxtaposes the pain of loss with the comfort found in cherished memories and the peacefulness of nature. U wrote this piece with so much gratitude flowing from it.

-Amy

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Amy. Yes dear poet, gratitude for having a wonderful mother who is so sadly missed. It was also her birthday last week, so there were two anniversaries to consider. I’m delighted with your kind review. So pleased you stopped by. Have a great day.

Chris

[Amy R]

Aww, I can say she's happy to see this, you're welcome kindly.

[Michael Sun Bear]

This is beautiful writing Chris, the words so carefully chosen and placed. In the first verse you take me into your own home; I can so clearly see the flowers, the mantle. Then you take me to a specific spot on the coast of your country, a place I have never visited, nor likely never will. But you have taken me there. Thank you. And overall you take us to the geography of the heart, describing events and emotions we all must deal with at some point in our lives. Well done. MSB

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your lovely review Michael. I do try hard to create images in my poetry, so I am so pleased you mentioned that. Pleased you felt transported to places you haven’t visited yourself. I also try to convey emotion in my work. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. It means a lot to me.

Chris

[Starr]

This is heart tugging, I liked your last two lines. I can feel lots of emotion in this.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Starr for sharing your thoughts on my poem. I appreciate your visit.

Chris

[bred Brick Keshner]

Such a beautiful celebration of life and love, Chris. Their name is bright like the celestial bodies that sentinel our world 🙏🏻🕊
Freds.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Freds for your lovely response. Very much valued.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Chris... the shadow of a gray day
will be your mantra ... there were moments of
sweet refrain when the Train whispered "All Aboard"...
and the Whistle was pure Crystal. softly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Pat. The train still runs on the track, but there aren’t so many of us left now in the carriage that was once home. Sending all best wishes to you both 🌹

Chris

[Orphic Dreamer]

The imagery painted in every sentence is beautiful, the comforting acceptance and the small tones of longing hidden like a delicate jewel is absolutely breathtaking. Great job!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Orphic Dreamer for both your visit and kind review. Good to see you.

Chris

[John the Baptist]

Grief has its own schedule, and that schedule is different for each person. It sounds as though you have passed through the main part of it, and this offering is basically a memorial. The imagery is very descriptive and relates your feelings well. I think your mother would be pleased.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much John. I mourned my mum before she even departed. Her decline wasn’t easy to navigate. I am now celebrating all she was. Ready to do so.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

A worthy tribute to your great mom. I like how you won't mourn but celebrate her, her life and achievements. A bouquet of Jasmine love is wonderful metaphor for your flowery love.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Sami for your lovely review. You are appreciated. Have a good Tuesday.
read moreThank you so much Sami for your lovely review. You are appreciated. Have a good Tuesday.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Chris Shaw.