Casting Out The Shadows

i do not fear the darkness
though i much prefer the light
while moonshine mid the scattered stars
are friends i meet by night

the sun’s rays on the garden
are a wonder to behold
dispelling all the gloom of shade
replacing it with gold

yet the flickering of candles
as they drip their life away
will usher in a peace of mind
whatever time of day

so surely what we seek the most
is a life of harmony
with those who hold us in their hearts
our friends and family

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

To the dearest Chris. Hope you are doing great. People are haunting me in dreams, that too they are fellow indians, i feel disgrace to them. They are like backstabbing me as they cant face me,
anyhow, i love and being loved by me is my whole purpose of my life and birth. He is really a God, his nature every other men envies,a dream boy to.women, for few he is like hot cake. For his caring heart, yielding everything of his' people wants to have him in their life as he is very soft and just listens, because most of men are like controlling, dominating, need women for social reason or either on bed. But he just cares truly from heart. A man such is like a kid, is more often missused by many for their advantage. I adore him, he knows.me very well. I dont hurt him and never taken advantage, he cares and adores me back as the lines you mentioned about sun, for the harmony they want to hav in their life

Loving you , 💙
Jessy jacob💙

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for leaving love Jessy. Kindness is so important.

[Coyote Poetry]

I do agree dear Chris.
"so surely what we seek the most
is a life of harmony
with those who hold us in their hearts
our friends and family"
I understand the above lines. Wasn't for my grandchildren. I would be lost and alone. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Coyote for a lovely review. Grandchildren are everything. I know that.
read moreThank you so much Coyote for a lovely review. Grandchildren are everything. I know that.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes they are and you are welcome dear Chris.

[MrBlack202]

Beautiful poem, and indeed "what we seek most is a life of harmony".

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for stopping by. I appreciate your time and your kind review. All good wishes.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

this one really touched me. it reads like a spiritual journey, heightened by the mention of candles. that we must look for the light - which can either be happiness, wisdom, compassion, faith or all of the above. 'i do not fear the darkness / though i much prefer the light,' gets me perfectly. facing fear, agony, or darker aspects of our souls is spiritual practice. but more brooding isn't the answer, it is to welcome the sun's rays 'dispelling all the gloom of shade / replacing it with gold.' it is full of wise words, and although i'm not sure if anybody holds me dear in their hearts, i will continue to try and show kindness to all around me and admire life's beauty, as this work reminded me to do.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such an encouraging review today. I appreciate your time.

[Chris]

Loneliness isn't being alone ...it's turning around to share something you've perceived and there is no one else there.

[Chris Shaw]

When there isn’t anyone else to share with I haven’t yet had to contemplate. I can honestly say that I have not experienced ever living alone. Even now in my older years, I have grandchildren living with me. I count my blessings. Thank you Chris.

[Chris]

Life happens Chris... I've lived on my own more than a fair bit.

[Davidgeo]

I think the last stanza could be called universal human insight.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you pleased you agree.

Chris

[J. B.]

Awh. This is a cute poem. Enjoyed reading this

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much. Pleased you enjoyed my efforts. Have a great day.

Chris

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Such sweet sentimental verse with a comforting message and a pensive look at the passage of time. Time is life and how we spend our time is how we spend our life. What could be sweeter than the company of those we love? Just lovely writing, my friend. I enjoyed. F.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Fabian for your lovely review. Warms my heart. Have a great day.

Chris

[G Wade]

I am not a poet or a reviewer, but I do love well placed words and enjoy work from Dylan Thomas, through Frank O'Hara and as diverse as Jim Morrison so I hope you will forgive my clumsy attempt. This is a beautiful poem, Chris! Here are some of my thoughts on it:

It uses vivid imagery to contrast light and darkness, symbolising different aspects of life. The light represents positivity, warmth, and clarity, while the darkness, though not feared, is a backdrop for the beauty of the stars and moon. The poem has a consistent rhythm and rhyme scheme, which makes it pleasant to read. The alternating lines create a soothing flow, much like the themes of peace and harmony you describe. It evokes a sense of tranquility and contentment.
The imagery of the sun’s rays and flickering candles brings a comforting visual that aligns with the theme of seeking harmony in life. The concluding lines beautifully encapsulate its message about the importance of harmony and the value of relationships with friends and family. It’s a reminder of what truly matters.

[Chris Shaw]

You have left me a wonderful review. Thank you so much for your visit. I truly appreciate the time you have spent leaving your thoughts. Have a great Thursday.

Chris

[Sean M. Addams]

Amazing piece love the imagery in this. Overall I thought you great on this.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Sean. Pleased you enjoyed this piece. All good wishes and thanks for stopping by.


Chris

[D. Mansfield]

Wow, I don't even have words. Excellent

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks so much Danny. Pleased you stopped by. All the best.

Chris