Fish Out of Water

(Spontaneous write)

my socks are wet my mum will know
i’ve been where told I shouldn’t go
but water fascinates me so
those shallow beds of watercress
i can not help but paddle there
and then i wade in gurgling streams
a fish i am within my dreams
an older me now understands
why lakes and rivers not dry land
can reel me in oh yes they do
i am a Pisces through and through

Reviews

[carl]

enjoyable read, captured the child fascination leading to adult inclination - good flow verse to verse - last line really closes it out nicely. Spontaneous writes can be rewarding - this one works very well. nice title -carl

[Chris Shaw]

So pleased you enjoyed this spontaneous write which came in the early hours Carl. I very much appreciate your visit and your shared thoughts. Enjoy the rest of Thursday.

Chris

[mae]

eek! astronomy!!! this is so fun, brings me back to when i was a little babe. thank you chris. -mabel

[Chris Shaw]

Hello lovely Mabel. Pleased you found some fun here and I was able to connect with your inner child. I appreciate your visit.

Chris