Blessings

Blessings

A Poem by Chris Shaw

look into the open heart
of a camellia in full bloom

what do you see within
the strata of soft silk perfection

a loveliness like a chirping bird at dawn
the glory of a new spring morning

a warning that life is fleeting
and that all too soon too soon

the raindrop nested tween petals
of a fine full skirted red dress

will let out a sigh at the
inevitable downturn and demise

yet even in death the old paving
is blessed with its gentle petal fall

scattered crimson confetti
tinctured with a fringe of decay


© 2024 Chris Shaw


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I have roses, tulips, wildflowers and sunflower plants in my garden. When blooming so beautiful. The bees adore the sunflower plants. I research the camellia dear Chris. Maybe I will seek and add to my garden. Good morning from Michigan and thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Chris Shaw

2 Weeks Ago

Camellias are beautiful shrubs Coyote. We have several in our garden. Quite large shrubs now, been s.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Weeks Ago

I do love my garden. I don't travel no-more. You are welcome dear Chris.
Fabulous Chris, beautifully worked and crafted. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Chris Shaw

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much Tony, I appreciate your visit. Have a great day.

Chris
Ah, what a lovely piece, Chris. I always enjoy the simplicity of your messages, both visually on the screen and in your choice of words. You are a nature perfectionist. This piece takes one round the circle of life, in a gentle and beautiful way. I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

7 Months Ago

I am so pleased Seriana that my poem did all that for you. Thank you so much for brightening my day.. read more
Delicacy and blessings throughout your flow. It really seems like a blessings!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

7 Months Ago

Nature is a wonderful friend. What are your favourite flowers Sky?
Writer at last! Sky ~

7 Months Ago

Yes, Indeed Nature is a true friend as well. My fav flowers are many Chris. Can't stick to one but s.. read more
Chris Shaw

7 Months Ago

How lovely. I have shrubs. Camellias, rhododendrons and azaleas. The orange blossom is wonderfully s.. read more
Life is short Chris and the farther I go along the route we all go, the quicker it seems to pass.
I sounded really old the other day when I woke, insisting that it can't be morning again, having felt that I'd barely digested yesterday's honey nut cornflakes!
At least you get pretty confetti at the end of the camellias life cycle, all I'm left with is indigestion! 😀

Posted 7 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

7 Months Ago

You need rennies Lorry. I think I’ll stick with my confetti petals. They are prettier and don’t .. read more
Such a sweet, soft piece, like a pastel painted butterfly; delicate and lovely, I enjoyed.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

8 Months Ago

Many thanks Fabian. Pleased you enjoyed the blessings of my garden. Have a lovely Sunday.
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Fabian G. Franklin

8 Months Ago

You too, dear. F.
Lovely use of adjectives to describe a certain seasonal atmosphere. I love how you have done this.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Ken. That means something coming from you. Happy Sunday.

Chris

having read these words several times already (not because I struggled to understand them before) but for the sheer joy of drinking them in and to appreciate how you arrived at the title .. and get this, even as I type, I can see the scattered crimson confetti of one of my very own camellias in the middle terraced garden across the way from my open study window .. ink well spilt our Chris .. Neville

Posted 8 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

8 Months Ago

You too have scattered crimson confetti from your camellias. How lovely the view must be from your s.. read more
Neville

8 Months Ago


.................. I know you do hawk-eye .. Neville
Blessing in pure form is strength. Great work friend

Posted 8 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

8 Months Ago

Thank you Arundass for your continued support. I appreciate you stopping by.

Chris

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

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