Naked Truth

(It’s my version of the truth:)

tell a guy you love him
he’ll scarper that’s for certain
before your lips have paused to rest
he’s left the stage it’s curtains

say you want to bed him
it will rock him to the core
like a cat whose dish is filled with cream
he’ll lick and beg for more

Reviews

[Víctor S]

This is so funnny, nice and even mischievous... like it a lot of lots. Inspired me a lil impro which add here as another form of comment.
A warm bed one can have
and then lick our jaws with a "miaooo",
yet the true "creme"
and top cherry I may add
comes with the accepted luv :D

[Chris Shaw]

So pleased for your visit. Even more that you like my wicked sense of humour. Thank you for your add on. Made me smile you did Victor. Have a lovely Thursday.

Chris

[Víctor S]

So grateful you liked my improv, so glad we can get each other's verses.

[June bug]

WOW! Love the playfulness of this write.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for anither delightful visit. Good to see you June Bug. I appreciate your time and thoughts.

Chris

[Papaya]

Definitely a bit of truth to that. 😀
That second verse is so naughty. I love it!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ana. My muse here was being very playful, but you are right. There is certainly an element of truth in what she was saying:)

[Rachel Fitzgerald-Feele..]

lol love the playfullness here and the rhyming sequence :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Rachel. Yes my muse was being very playful:) Pleased you noticed. Have a good Wednesday.

Chris

[Neville]

Ooh er Matron .. Ding dong .. I wonder how many of us have been thus shafted .. and anyway, I always keep my socks on just in case I need to do a runna .. Neville :)

[Chris Shaw]

Ha ha. No man has ever left his socks on in my bed, just in case:)) Thanks for the smile Neville.

Chris 😂

[Neville]

You are of course welcome .. and I trust you know I was kidding .. it makes sense to leave ya boots on too .. N 😉

[Chris Shaw]

Oh my:)) Boots too. Now that takes the biscuit :)

[Soren]

Put so well into poetic verse the difference between men and women. To be so crude as to generalize women see love as romance, men see it as sex. Although there are many variations it seems in general true. Men are dogs not wolves. (dogs look for sex everywhere, wolves are more loyal to their mate). Loved the playfulness in this poem as well making what could be a bitter subject sweet with some humor.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Soren. I love your response. My muse was being very playful when she wrote this. She was actually laughing:) Thank you for seeing the humour and not a bitter wretch of a woman:)

Chris

[duff]

This has a wicked tongue. An attitude whiplash. This brought a huge grin.

[Chris Shaw]

It is wicked isn’t it? My muse couldn’t help herself duff:) Thanh’s for stopping by.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

bed without love...yes, that is all some want...no commitment...just the fun part.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Yes, for some j. My muse was being a bit naughty here. Not a serious piece, more an observation of the behavior of some lusty youngsters:) Thank you my friend.

Chris

Chris

[mabel mae]

perfect example of lust. a lot of love poems are sweet, cute, simple. oh a daisy. you really just said f**k that and wrote something about lust and leading men. love this. -mabel

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Mabel. There’s a lot of lust around these days:) My muse was being playful. Pleased you enjoyed the read:)

Chris