Reminisce

this index finger on my write hand
settles on words written in
bold black ink

tracing the pathway
of a poet’s pen in slow motion
and repeating with reverence
over and over again

these lines harboured by time
scribed on the inside cover
of this book of longing

a gift

‘Why are we doing this today
she said’
‘So we can write about it for
years and smile’
he replied

and years later we continue
to smile as we write our poems

but in truth there is forever an ache
in that part of my heart
reserved for a poet
who fluttered a butterfly’s
dormant wings with his
words of romantic
yearning

Reviews

[J. B.]

Such a pretty piece :) I really enjoyed reading.

“who fluttered a butterfly’s
dormant wings with his
words of romantic
yearning”

Such a pretty stanza

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much JB for your kind comments. I appreciate you stopping by.

Chris

[red93]

This is fantastic Chris and it has a real lyrical grace and control that one only rarely encounters on the Cafe. Have you thought of submitting this to one of the UK's better Poetry Magazines ? I feel sure it would be accepted. You are writing at a higher level these days no doubt at all. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tony for your very kind and thoughtful review. I really don’t take my own poetry that seriously. Have a beautiful day.

Chris

[Kim S.]

A very amazing write here, I like sitting outside and writing.
Nicely written Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kim. I enjoy writing too in the natural environment. I always feel best close to nature. Enjoy the day.

Chris

[Kim S.]

you too : )

[MrBlack202]

Wow your poetry continues to marvel me. With such a unique writing style.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much. What a lovely thing to say. You are welcome here.

Chris

[zainul]

Looking at the beautiful butterflies flying in front of me in the prevailing heat wave,your poem appeared as a solace of my heart.
Keep writing such good poems and enlighten us.
Enjoy poems and availale time.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you my friend for such a heart warming review. Poetry has been a life saver to me. I can’t imagine my life without it. All good wishes.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Very romantic poetry...
The memory of a loved one is always something to cherish.
And what beautiful poems we can create with our memories and experiences.
Very much enjoyed to read this one.
Keep it up! Take good care.
😄

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much my friend for stopping by. I appreciate you.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.
😄

[Revery]

Writing is cathartic. I often find myself writing about writing and the poetic process.

About drifting through memories and wishes and desires.

This is a wonderful poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Revery, I thank you for your visit and your kind comment. Pleased you stopped by to review.

Chris

[Amy R]

This shows how powerful poetry can be when it comes to memories and emotions,
quite a powerful write.
I enjoyed this piece,.
-Amy

[Chris Shaw]

Another kind review from you Amy. Thank you so much. All the best. I appreciate your encouragement.

Chris

[Amy R]

You're very welcome!

[Arundass TP]

This I feel this is a unique poem of understanding like a framed art. Goo one friend

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your very thoughtful response Arundass. Pleased you enjoyed this poem.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Surely. You are welcomed

[MomzillaNC]

Thoughtful and poignant.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for stopping by today to share your thoughts. I appreciate your time.

read moreThank you so much for stopping by today to share your thoughts. I appreciate your time.

Chris

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome