Wind Song

Wind Song

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(river musings)

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i am breeze
a song of wind whispers
the bringer of echoes
of old church bells
carried downstream

i am movement
of graceful willows seen
on the far bank
green tresses swaying
surface water dipping

I am flurry
a floating flotilla of leaves
blown from autumn trees
golden in their glory
small sail boats every one

I am scatters
of diamond dust gleaming
created by the gift of sun
a dance of sporadic sparkles
spangling river ripples

i am a distraction
I am a distraction
I am a distraction
from a warring world
of broken hearts



© 2023 Chris Shaw


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The secrets that the wind can know dear Chris.
"I am scatters
of diamond dust gleaming
created by the gift of sun
a dance of sporadic sparkles
spangling river ripples"
I adored the above lines. Good morning from Michigan and thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your warm encouragement Coyote. I appreciate you and your visit. Have a good day.
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Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Chris.



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It is probably best to turn off the news and turn our attention to nature in light of all the violence that is happening in the world at present. I dare say, if we all endeavoured to spend more time enjoying the tranquillity of nature we may well be more calmer for the experience. I particularly liked the image of a 'floating flotilla of leaves'. Lovely alliterated there to create that image. A very welcome distraction is your poem itself.

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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Makhabat for your visit and sharing your thoughts. I agree best not to watch the tv. Have .. read more
There's so much sheer beauty in the outer world to distract us from the inner world of loss and sadness. Your simple, direct and touching words hit home so powerfully. Always something special from you, dear Chris.

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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thanks DIVYA, the natural world can certainly take our minds away from the horrors. Even for a.. read more
dear Chris... your poem is a dedication to all the precious Souls of young and old... as their Spirit has become sacred gold and silver of the Autumn leaves as they become the glow of a million beams of Light. softly, Pat

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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Dear, Pat your review is so worthy to the memory of all those now lost. Thank you dearly for the bea.. read more
Patricia Wedel

1 Year Ago

Blessings abound when words become a Song... softly, Pat
The secrets that the wind can know dear Chris.
"I am scatters
of diamond dust gleaming
created by the gift of sun
a dance of sporadic sparkles
spangling river ripples"
I adored the above lines. Good morning from Michigan and thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your warm encouragement Coyote. I appreciate you and your visit. Have a good day.
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Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Chris.
There's something really calming in the breeze by the water. I enjoyed this. F.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Fabian. I appreciate your kind words. Have a good day.

Chris
Love the imagery in this. Very peaceful and uplifting. Overall great job on this .

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thanks Sean for an encouraging review. I appreciate your thoughts. All good wishes.
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Definitely a distraction from the world and all of the bad news that seems to be being screamed everywhere right now. A soft, subtle, soothing piece of writing my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you will for a lovely review. I appreciate you. All the best.

Chris
Oh Chris, what a lovely piece. I felt carried away by your words, and learned a new one! Flotilla! Thank you for that. This is a favorite for sure. Like a warm hug.
Best,
Amber

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Amber, how are you doing my friend? It is lovely to see you back here posting. Sendin.. read more
A gorgeous poem. Every stanza echoes beauty and nature's soft sounds. I like how you contrast the wind with our warring world.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sami. I appreciate your words and your visit. Have a good Wednesday my friend.
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Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Chris.
just stunning, you know how to bring words to life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you jaye river for your visit. Have a good Tuesday.

Chris

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Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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