the sunlight in my garden
blinked and switched off cold
what happened to those leaves of birch
that flaunted all that gold
cast they are in shadow lands
and thankful for the rest
too much attention doesn’t pay
for that I can attest
Yes Chris, I concur!
I was only just this minute thinking I might fancy a walk through the nature trails and was in the process of filling a flask, before asking Katie if she fancied joining me, when I looked round, expecting to see streams of sunlight peeking through clouds, but was instead met with portents of gloom!
I'm still going though. Just need to remember to wear waterproofs, which is a sure way of rebrightening any day and leaving me sweating like a sweaty thing on national be more sweaty than usual day! 😊
Those pesky clouds Lorry. They do have a habit of blotting out the sunlight and spoiling things. Hop.. read moreThose pesky clouds Lorry. They do have a habit of blotting out the sunlight and spoiling things. Hope you and Katie are well. All the best and a big thank you fir stopping by.
attention...can be good or bad...I like the personification
of the sunlight switching itself on and off to protect the privacy of the garden
that wants only to bring joy to the one who planted her.
Sunlight to a garden can be like paparazzi to a celebrity.
Without the roses.
j.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you dear J. Attention, so right, it can be both good and bad. Sometimes the shade is so welcom.. read moreThank you dear J. Attention, so right, it can be both good and bad. Sometimes the shade is so welcome.
Thank you my friend for your beautiful review. Pleased this one has your approval:)
C.. read moreThank you my friend for your beautiful review. Pleased this one has your approval:)
Chris
1 Year Ago
every single one of my seven words up there in that little rectangle were meant when I first.. read more
every single one of my seven words up there in that little rectangle were meant when I first writ them and still are upon my revisit .. and I imagine that they shall now remain so .. Neville
dearest Chris... the Winds have been dancing like a field of Barley that ripens after an Autumn rain. The colors of Amber and Magenta become entwined with Drops of Jupiter from above. Our Hearts mellow with the yellow Sun. softly, Pat
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
What a beautiful review Pat. So poetic. Mellow yellow always reminds me of Donovan. I am still a hi.. read moreWhat a beautiful review Pat. So poetic. Mellow yellow always reminds me of Donovan. I am still a hippie chick at heart.
Yes Chris, I concur!
I was only just this minute thinking I might fancy a walk through the nature trails and was in the process of filling a flask, before asking Katie if she fancied joining me, when I looked round, expecting to see streams of sunlight peeking through clouds, but was instead met with portents of gloom!
I'm still going though. Just need to remember to wear waterproofs, which is a sure way of rebrightening any day and leaving me sweating like a sweaty thing on national be more sweaty than usual day! 😊
Those pesky clouds Lorry. They do have a habit of blotting out the sunlight and spoiling things. Hop.. read moreThose pesky clouds Lorry. They do have a habit of blotting out the sunlight and spoiling things. Hope you and Katie are well. All the best and a big thank you fir stopping by.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..