Jahkai brings sunshine
it’s his way
he adds value to many
a could be better day
he’s only three
but he’s the bees knees
to me
so when the phone rings
and he says hello nanny
it’s me and he tells me
that he’s been feeding
the quacking ducks
while listening to birds
singing from their house
in the trees
with a see you soon
I love you like ice-cream
I know he already has
the makings of a poet
... Or he knows how to butter you up enough to get more treats from you 😊
Kids eh? They do have a talent for just cutting to the point. It's such a pity that saying things as they are will be frowned upon soon, but while he's young, he can just say things like "that tastes disgusting" without worrying about the cooks hurt feelings or worrying about how much ice cream costs, when he has his nan to treat him 😊
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1 Year Ago
Thank you Lorry. Somehow I missed sending you my thanks. Belated they are but better late than never.. read moreThank you Lorry. Somehow I missed sending you my thanks. Belated they are but better late than never. You are so right about kids coming to the point. I have also seen the other side of Jahkai:)) The one where he has to eat his greens:)
I remember the benefits too. When my gran was told she was going to be a great gran, my eldest sis p.. read moreI remember the benefits too. When my gran was told she was going to be a great gran, my eldest sis piped in and said "but you've always been a great gran."
I'm still wishing I'd said it, as my gran bought her the biggest box of chocs I've ever seen. 😊
She did share them though, or as I put it, recycled the ones she didn't like.
1 Year Ago
Your eldest sis, has wisdom on her side:)
1 Year Ago
And just like a nan, we all know you think he's the bees knees, and legs and toes 😊
Your grandson loves the Quacking Ducks… that is Poetic.. we shall always have Poets and Artists, as well as Musicians … and Dancers… softly, Pat
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1 Year Ago
We need people who have a creative side to flourish. Jahkai is showing his early. Have a peaceful .. read moreWe need people who have a creative side to flourish. Jahkai is showing his early. Have a peaceful Sunday Pat. All good wishes.
aww, he sounds so cute and is just at the right age for a beautiful innocence bless him.
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1 Year Ago
He is adorable Stella. Those days of innocence are a wonder. Pleased you stopped by to say hello to .. read moreHe is adorable Stella. Those days of innocence are a wonder. Pleased you stopped by to say hello to Jahkai.
Chris
1 Year Ago
" Hi gorgeous little you " ... my messsage to Jahkai ♥
dear Chris... your Poem reminds me of the Song by Johnny Mathias...
"like a Kitten up a Tree... I get Misty just holding your Hand"... softly, Pat
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1 Year Ago
Beautiful song dear Pat. That one a firm favourite with my Dad. I can hear him now singing it to my .. read moreBeautiful song dear Pat. That one a firm favourite with my Dad. I can hear him now singing it to my mum, her green eyes smiling. Have a wonderful Friday.
Beautifully portrayed Chris .. the joys of grandparenthood personified .. I imagine, hope and pray that I may be able to wrap the makings of a poem on the same subject in the near future .. Be sure I leave this page with a smile :)
Neville
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1 Year Ago
Pleased you left with a smile Neville. Well very, very soon because we are now in July, you will fi.. read morePleased you left with a smile Neville. Well very, very soon because we are now in July, you will find out for yourself the utter joy of being a grandparent. And when you hold that little bundle of joy for the first time, you will be in heaven when you get that rush of love that comes.
Thank you my friend.
Aren't children wonderful at that age Chris. Before School and this awful World rob them of their holy innocence.
Very good to know you are a proud Grandmother. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
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1 Year Ago
Yes, innocent, lovable and delightful. They can certainly lift your spirits and it costs nothing in.. read moreYes, innocent, lovable and delightful. They can certainly lift your spirits and it costs nothing in an age where everything is so costly. Many thanks Tony for your warm review. Have a great Thursday.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..