A Pocketful of Smiles

Jahkai brings sunshine
it’s his way
he adds value to many
a could be better day
he’s only three
but he’s the bees knees
to me

so when the phone rings
and he says hello nanny
it’s me and he tells me
that he’s been feeding
the quacking ducks
while listening to birds
singing from their house
in the trees

with a see you soon
I love you like ice-cream
I know he already has
the makings of a poet

Reviews

[Lorry]

... Or he knows how to butter you up enough to get more treats from you 😊
Kids eh? They do have a talent for just cutting to the point. It's such a pity that saying things as they are will be frowned upon soon, but while he's young, he can just say things like "that tastes disgusting" without worrying about the cooks hurt feelings or worrying about how much ice cream costs, when he has his nan to treat him 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lorry. Somehow I missed sending you my thanks. Belated they are but better late than never. You are so right about kids coming to the point. I have also seen the other side of Jahkai:)) The one where he has to eat his greens:)

Chris

[Lorry]

I remember the benefits too. When my gran was told she was going to be a great gran, my eldest sis piped in and said "but you've always been a great gran."
I'm still wishing I'd said it, as my gran bought her the biggest box of chocs I've ever seen. 😊
She did share them though, or as I put it, recycled the ones she didn't like.

[Chris Shaw]

Your eldest sis, has wisdom on her side:)

[Lorry]

And just like a nan, we all know you think he's the bees knees, and legs and toes 😊

[W. Barrett Munn]

Ah, I don't know how I missed this little gem. As we age we appreciate more and see ourselves hopefully, in others.

Winston

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Winston and apologies for my belated response. All the best.

Chris

[Stuart Munro]

I’d like a pocketful of smiles , and just stick one on , when I look gloomy ☹️
I like your poem Chris , a lovely little mind smiler

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you kindly Stuart. Have s good day.

Chris

[Stuart Munro]

Thank you , you too , Chris

[Fran Marie]

I love you like ice cream..what sweet innocence of
a child showing their affection .I say there's a poet
indeed in the making here, entailing how he already
has a grasp on the surrounding nature..he is the .
"bees knees"..haven't heard that expression used for
quite a while...nice work Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Fran. Yes that innocence is so special isn’t it? Your review is very much appreciated. Good to see you.

Chris

[Relic]

He's in the best time of his life with the best nanny. Innocence is often jaded through life experience. Someday he'll share his intelligent thoughts through poetry instead of depression or violence. Good one, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

I hope you are right. I would love him to have poetry in his life. Thank you so much Tim. I appreciate your words.

Chris

[Isola]

Hi Chris, your poem has captured the precious nature of your little grandson, a child, wide-eyed and curious about the world and sensitive to it. A budding poet.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Isola. Delighted to have a visit from you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts:) All the best.

Chris

[Isola]

Thank you Chris, it is my pleasure.

[Soren]

Children are poets and some of us loose this ability rather than gain it in a world that has no time to listen. This poem gave the feel of innocence and I could hear my grand children in it. There is nothing like children to make one feel young again and bring out the poetry that lays buried under layers of years of learning.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Soren for your lovely review. Pleased you found my words relatable. Children can certainly make you feel young at heart:)

Chris

[Beccy]

Poetry and ice cream, a perfect balmy evening combination.

Blessings to you and Jahkai Chris. Grandchildren are a wonderful gift, including my Charlie, there are five in total in our family now and mum and dad adore, (and spoil,) them all.

Beccy.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Beccy and every good wish to you and Charlie. May your mum and dad continue to adore their grandchildren for many years to come.

Chris

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful celebration of childhood innocence and the way that children have a natural talent for bringing light and joy into the world. I loved the way that you used vivid imagery and powerful language to convey the idea that Jahkai is able to bring sunshine into the lives of those around him, and that his presence is able to make even the most difficult days feel a little bit brighter. Your poem also beautifully captures the idea that even at the age of three, Jahkai has a natural talent for poetry and is able to see the beauty in the world around him. Your words are a beautiful reminder of the power of childhood innocence and the way that it has the ability to transform the world around us.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Bhuyanshi. so pleased to have a visit from you. Your beautiful review has touched me this Monday morning. Have a happy Monday and many thanks.

Chris

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

You're very welcome! I'm glad that my review was able to brighten up your Monday morning. Wishing you a wonderful day ahead as well!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you. I will pay you a visit later today.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

how could he not with a NaNa like you Ms. Chris Shaw! this poem lifts my heart and puts a smile between me ears :)
E.

[Chris Shaw]

What a lovely surprise to find you here Mr E. I do hope all is well in your world. Thank you for calling
on this poem about my youngest grandson. He is the apple of my eye. Have a very happy Monday.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

they are a joy no doubt! :))) the other day my youngest told his Dad he wanted "not cooked bread" ... his Dad said ".. so....... you want a piece of bread .... right??"