From Seed

i plant memories
since no amount of
trinkets or financial gain
when departing this
earthly plane
can replace the love
given freely from
heart and soul

i plant memories
i do so by the day
and last Saturday was one
of the very best
blessed by warmth of sun
green trees overhanging
blue lakes
my whole family took
a day out

nothing to shout about
though what a day that turned
out to be
one for the album of joyful
to be mounted in the corridors
of generational memory

i plant happy

Reviews

[Stuart Munro]

I’m just a seed planter , put on the earth , to bear children , and when I die , my seed will go with me
On a happier note , lol, we are a world of seeds , the beauty of nature described here , in your well written poem , our joy is seeds working for us , to establish beauty , of nature , shame the seeds establish also the ugliness of man

[Chris Shaw]

Sadly there are bad seeds too Stuart. Doing my best to multiply some happy. Thanks for your review and stopping by.

Chris

[Stuart Munro]

Thanks Chris ,

[red93]

Really lovely Chris - what is more beautiful than an early Summer Day in England ? Bright Sun here in Bristol UK today, and I think we are in for another scorching Summer ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Tony. Hoping very much for a wonderful summer. Yes the sun shines in Berkshire and it is going to be hot. Make sure you have a wonderful day.

Chris

[red93]

We were up to 40 degrees C last year in Bristol UK xx

[Chris Shaw]

Enjoy :) …………

[E.P. Robles]

How you explore the themes of transience, love, familial bonds, nature, and the significance of memories.

Your use of imagery and symbolism uses a concept of 'planting memories' as a metaphor, connecting the process of making and preserving memories with the nurturing process of planting and growing.

Just as a seed is sown, nurtured, and eventually blossoms, so too do the memories that you plant. The green trees, the warmth of the sun, and the blue lakes present a vibrant picture of a beautiful day that serves as the backdrop for the creation of these memories.

You've written prose in a tone that is reflective, sincere, and joyful, effectively communicating the mood of warmth and happiness that pervades the poem evoking a sense of delight at the simple pleasures of life, such as a family outing on a sunny day, creating an emotional appeal that resonates with the reader.

I very much adore this poem. Bravo! I will think of it for the rest of this night.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your amazing review. I am thrilled that you like this little write so much and that it will linger on your mind for the rest of the night.

Chris

[Carola]

hi chris
what a wonderful & inspiring poem, with such a warm homely scene setting.
i love your idea of memory planting & planting happy.
have a great sunday
cheerio carola

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Carola, you have left me such a lovely warm review. Many thank yous. All good wishes.

Chris

[C.S. Williams]

Very nice and thoughtful. Definitely puts the importance of memory into perspective.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you kindly for your visit. Pleased you enjoyed my lines.

Chris

[Ken Simm.]

Planting happy. what a concept and one I would love to be associated with. A really joyous poem from a truly gifted writer.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ken for stopping by and being so kind with your review. I hope you have a great day today. All the best.

Chris

[Andrew John]

Love this image of "planting" happy, happiness, joy. I realise that, the older we get (not that you look old, dear Chris!), the more we need to plant those memories, keep them, look at them often, like looking at a treasured piece of jewellery, or someone's poetry. Thanks, Chris. Always a pleasure to visit your material.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Andrew for your lovely comment. It is true as we get older the memories and building them become more important. I lost my mum last year so I am now the matriarch in the family. That sounds really old doesn’t it lol. So pleased you enjoyed the read. You are kind.

Chris

[AYVID N]

Wow....this is what true blessings read like. Your words are wonderful and invigorating to read and every reader is moved to count their own blessings. That is what ideal poetry must do and you do it beyond expectations, dear Chris. Once again, your poetic beauty comes to the fore in your description of the amazing day which did not seem out of the way and yet it was so memorable and will stay planted in your memories forever. Such wonderful days just knock on our door softly and unexpectedly and they are our greatest gifts from God and a sign He loves us. Kudos! You always have something special to offer.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear DIVYA. After losing my mum last year and settling her estate, I find I am the matriarch in my family and wider family. My wish is to have plenty of happy memories for all to look back on. Days out and family get togethers are high on my list. We have plenty planned. I am pleased to say that these days are really being appreciated and that lifts me so much. Your reviews are special to me. Have a restful day dear friend.

Chris 🌺

[AYVID N]

It sounds wonderful, dear Chris. Enjoy each and every get together and family outings. I wish you days filled with zest, sunshine and joy. ❤⚘

[John the Baptist]

This one has both charm and wisdom. Material things can be nice, but they are often soon forgotten. Outings like the one described may be "nothing to shout about," but an adult fifty years from now may regard it as a treasured childhood memory.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks John. You are so right. Those memories do become treasure. Many thanks for stopping by.
read moreThanks John. You are so right. Those memories do become treasure. Many thanks for stopping by.

Chris

[duff]

An album crate of thoughts. A recollection day. Cradle memories and never let go. Nice work Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks duff. I look forward to those family days so much. All the best.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

seeds to make a beautiful garden, which you always do...and seeds of love and friendship to make your family and/or extended family grow...
beautiful seeds to plant beautiful happy.
I am quite filled with hope reading this treasure.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

What s lovely review J. So pleased you found some hope and treasure in my poem. I’ll treasure your review too.

Chris