Lift Off

when moody waters wrestle
with darkest swirling thoughts
and whirlpools deep inside your mind
are dreams you never caught
take heed and lift your head up
to gaze where stars are found
and stay there till it’s safe again
to land on kinder ground

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Chris this is a wonderful inspiring poem. It offers hope. A message so profound and universal as we all need this at times ‘take heed and lift your head up to gaze where stars are found’ beautifully said. A great title too. Lift Off indeed. This is a gorgeous poem. Going into my favorites. Utterly beautiful.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous Ladysue for such an uplifting review. You have made my day. All good wishes.

Chris

[Pauline]

Awe Chris, this is so inspiringly beautiful.(I'm uplifted already.)
P.
Hope all's good at your end.x

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. Very inspiring.

[Inkspire]

The poem is short simple and cheerful.
The poem creates paints a mental visual as we read.
Also, the title is catchy.

[Martiya Daman]

This poem is about feeling sad, like being lost in deep water. But it says to look at the stars and wait until you feel safe again. It gives hope that bad times will pass, and you will find a better place. It’s short, simple, and makes you feel better. Lovely, Chris. Happy weekdays, enjoyed my visit.

Martiya

[Manta Ray Lily]

Fantabulous poem mam. A very short but a powerful poem it is. I absolutely loved it!

[W. Barrett Munn]

This is really fine work in meter and rhyme, beautifully crafted. You should be proud as this is not an easy task to accomplish to this high of degree of success.

[Christina J. Barker]

Hey there, fellow writer! If you’re looking to polish your work, refine your story, or just make sure everything reads smoothly, I’m here to help as your beta reader, proofreader, and editor. Let’s work together to make your writing shine!

[Daz]

Such a lovely poem Chris.

[Arundass TP]

Interesting poem. Loved it and enjoyed reading

[MCS]

Thank you for sharing your words of wisdom in these troubling times.

[redd Brick Keshner]

Dreams are to be glimpsed at and pondered upon, captivity kills them… the dreamscape is beautiful and safe if lift off is achieved! Wonderful, Chris 🙏🏻🕊
Freds.