A amazing poem dear Chris.
"do you have any idea
how on a blue morning
you flood my mind with
memories"
I understand the above lives. I have many flowers, re-planted from my grandfather's yard. When they bloom, I can see his face and hear his voice. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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Thank you dear friend for your lovely review. Flowers talk to me too. You understand. I have wonderf.. read moreThank you dear friend for your lovely review. Flowers talk to me too. You understand. I have wonderful memories with some flowers. This was a buttercup. Have a lovely day.
You are welcome dear Chris. I am retired now. I added purple/black roses to my English white and red.. read moreYou are welcome dear Chris. I am retired now. I added purple/black roses to my English white and red in my garden. My days of traveling is done. Grandchildren and yard. I became my grandfather.
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That is what happens. I am now following my mother’s path.
Beautiful, soft and sincere. A smile to to both sleep and wake to. How comforting your words always are, , Chris.
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Thank you Em. That little flower helped to balance out some sad news. I was more then grateful to f.. read moreThank you Em. That little flower helped to balance out some sad news. I was more then grateful to focus on its beauty. Have a great weekend.
Chris
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Am truly sorry you needed specific comfort, Chris; seems life throws up some terrible - often unexp.. read moreAm truly sorry you needed specific comfort, Chris; seems life throws up some terrible - often unexpected sadness. Times when even a small something serves as a comfort. Your poem is as always, -finely written, (Chris)
This is exquisite. The sorrow and beauty in life intertwined together always gives the best poetry.
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Ahmad, you have left me both appreciative and delighted with your review. Thank you fir your kindnes.. read moreAhmad, you have left me both appreciative and delighted with your review. Thank you fir your kindness.
That is quite a sentence you have written, Chris, sadness and happiness wrapped in a blue and yellow bow.
Winston
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Thank you Winston. That is precisely what the poem is about. Thank you for your insights. Have a ple.. read moreThank you Winston. That is precisely what the poem is about. Thank you for your insights. Have a pleasing day.
Obviously, this is about more than one small, yellow flower. Something about it has triggered memories, maybe of people, or of a time generally, that is no more. Nature is like that. In its countless displays of beauty it can call up both what is and what is gone. We should treasure these memories, but at the same not letting them dominate our lives.
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You are so right John. I had some sad news just before writing this poem. I felt the need to get som.. read moreYou are so right John. I had some sad news just before writing this poem. I felt the need to get some balance. Sunshine helps. Thank you so much.
I dont wish to overstate the fact but found myself smiling uncontrollably throughout my encounter with little gem .. made this fella feel kinda mella in a yella kinda way :)
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You are so sixties my friend and I love that because I am too. I was thinking Donovan when I wrote t.. read moreYou are so sixties my friend and I love that because I am too. I was thinking Donovan when I wrote this piece and his Yellow is the colour. A time of happy memories, needed for a sad day. Hope you have a great weekend.
He sprang to my mind too .. I do believe he is touring .. Have a great weekend as well Chris.. read more
He sprang to my mind too .. I do believe he is touring .. Have a great weekend as well Chris :)
In colour theory yellow is the opposite or complimentary of blue. Each makes the other stand out.But you probably knew that.
A delightful little poem that I throughly enjoyed.
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Dear Ken, I didn’t know that so your visit has been an education. Pleased you enjoyed this little .. read moreDear Ken, I didn’t know that so your visit has been an education. Pleased you enjoyed this little offering. Thanking you so much. Have a lovely day.
I am assuming this refers to a buttercup and I know what you mean. A clouded, gloomy day, look down at this cheerful little bloom and all of the sudden, things don't seem so bad. If indeed it is a buttercup in this poem, I remember as kids we used to pick them and hold them up to our chin and the sun would reflect off of them creating a yellow glow to our chin skin. : )
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It is a buttercup I was addressing will in the poem. They always make me smile and think of my young.. read moreIt is a buttercup I was addressing will in the poem. They always make me smile and think of my younger days. Thanking you for your lovely review. All good wishes my friend.
looking at that lonely flower would remind us of the times we sat alone in our own garden of acquaintances just wishing one would stop and touch us...feel the scent of our love.
j.
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Thank you J. Loneliness is a sad place to be. That is always wise to remember and consider those in.. read moreThank you J. Loneliness is a sad place to be. That is always wise to remember and consider those in that position. Have a good weekend.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..