On the Scent of Pine

imagine
if all the souls
of our long departed
lit up the pine forest
at night like fireflies
in love

chasing
winking and blinking
beckoning us to their party
having a ball
while we

in wide eyed wonder
in silence and gratitude
watch in awe
a taste of timeless
of heaven’s potential
on the scent of
lasting pine

Reviews

[E.P. Robles]

In this captivating scene, a pine forest comes alive at night as departed souls illuminate it, resembling ethereal fireflies. The playful souls beckon us to join their celestial gathering, exuding joy and embracing newfound freedom. As humble observers, we stand in awe, aware that we are witnessing something beyond ordinary existence. This remarkable display offers a glimpse into the timeless and limitless potential of the heavens. The lasting pine scent grounds us in the sensory experience and symbolizes the enduring connection between souls. This vivid portrayal blurs the boundaries between life and the afterlife, inspiring reflection on the beauty, unity, and transcendence within the mysteries of existence.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you fur capturing the magical under the scent of forest pine. Yes, let’s imagine ……..

Chris

[willweb]

The solitude of a forest of pine trees, hearing the wind rustle gentle through the needles, an occasional pinecone falling and fireflies, tiny points of light that flicker and flitter about while we imagine they are long past loved ones. How soothing is that? Beautiful Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you will for your kind words. Your reviews are always so encouraging. You are very much appreciated.

Chris

[Pete]

dearest chris. i am in awe of this piece and all of its splendor and magnificence. my mouth hung open as i read. it shot an emotional arrow straight to the bullseye of my heart. if this doesn't lift the spirit then i don't know what ever would. from the title and everything on down. powerfully spiritual, uplifting and enlightening. i will proudly shelve this for dark times. bravo. outstanding ... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pete, your encouraging review has given me a lift too. So pleased that these words spoke to you. I have only ever seen fireflies on tv, but even that, I found a spiritual experience. They fascinated me with their light in a forest of darkness. A little bit of heaven. A big thank you.

Chris

[Pete]

my sheer pleasure and delight. i doubt we are ever the same after seeing a firefly. i happily recall seeing them as a child and chasing after them. we never forget such things. to this day my spirit lights up more than them when i am blessed to see one. thank you for the gift of yourself and your poetry ... :)

[Chris Shaw]

You are too kind. Pete I have tried to review your work for the last couple of days, but it won’t allow me. Each poem I zap on it comes up that there is a writerscafe fault. Just to let you know in case others are having the same problem. I will keep trying .

[Chris Shaw]

This is what keeps coming up

A problem repeatedly occurred on
https://www.writerscafe.org/ptine.”

I don’t get that trying to access other poet’s library

[moog-drika]

I'll keep imagining this if I ever land up alone in a pine forest. It's going to help me feel relaxed.
Ahh the visuals! So beautiful that I'm awestruck.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you moog-drika. Pleased you stopped by today with your thoughts. All the best to you.

Chris

[JustPlainHere]

What a gorgeous image of souls here. I love the incorporation of light and the recycling of life in this as well. The idea of souls lighting the dark is not only beautiful but profound and appropriate for souls. A really moving piece of work, I really enjoyed.

[Chris Shaw]

That’s a really kind review you have left here. Thank you so much, your visit is really appreciated. Have a good Monday.

Chris

[Soren]

Ah Chris and who says they don't? Just that we may not be able to see this from where we are. It would be a glorious sight indeed. A beautiful thought and wonderful write.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for an uplifting review. Now wouldn’t that be lovely Soren? I appreciate you stopping by.

Chris

[Cherrie Palmer]

I never feel alone in the forest and this must be why.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Cherrie, pleased you stopped by today. All the best.

Chris

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I think if this was to be true, that pine forest would be the brightest place on earth. Millions upon millions of fireflies congregating and celebrating the lives that were once lived. It made me think of reincarnation and I suppose returning as a firefly is not all that bad an idea.

This poem reminds me of something written in a moment of daydreaming thought. Completely out of the blue yet an idea that creates a lasting image of the possibility of what heaven could be.

Intriguing idea, well expressed.

[Chris Shaw]

When I do my housework Doodley, I daydream quite a lot. It helps break up the monotony. I just imagined the brilliance of the flickering lights in their magnitude. I also love fairy lights and have them at home too. All year round, not just at Christmas. Thank you for your visit and thoughts, very much appreciated.

Chris

[lightsong]

You have my tears, my heart, my soul into this dearest Chris... someone who knows, understands and feels the divine of pine' scent, and write it in that sublimity way is a Golden Soul.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you lightsong for your beautiful thoughts. I love the scent of pine and I love light as well. I appreciate you.

Chris

[Shelley Warner]

Such a lovey thought, the souls of our departed lighting up the pine forest

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Shelley. I have to say the idea lifted me. Pleased you thought so too. Hope you are happy abdcwell Shelley.

Chris

[Lorry]

And I bet they get a choice of a vast menu of desserts too, while we trudge through our as yet only known realist, which currently defies logic by both sucking and blowing at the same time! 😊
I can't wait to finally try out snozzberry cheesecake. 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Lorry thank you. I think you are in need of a sugar fix. Have a bag of dolly mixtures to keep you going 🙂

Chris

[Lorry]

Well, I take it that you'll not be inviting me to your snowberry cheesecake party then? 😊