On the Scent of Pine

imagine
if all the souls
of our long departed
lit up the pine forest
at night like fireflies
in love

chasing
winking and blinking
beckoning us to their party
having a ball
while we

in wide eyed wonder
in silence and gratitude
watch in awe
a taste of timeless
of heaven’s potential
on the scent of
lasting pine

Reviews

[E.P. Robles]

In this captivating scene, a pine forest comes alive at night as departed souls illuminate it, resembling ethereal fireflies. The playful souls beckon us to join their celestial gathering, exuding joy and embracing newfound freedom. As humble observers, we stand in awe, aware that we are witnessing something beyond ordinary existence. This remarkable display offers a glimpse into the timeless and limitless potential of the heavens. The lasting pine scent grounds us in the sensory experience and symbolizes the enduring connection between souls. This vivid portrayal blurs the boundaries between life and the afterlife, inspiring reflection on the beauty, unity, and transcendence within the mysteries of existence.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you fur capturing the magical under the scent of forest pine. Yes, let’s imagine ……..

Chris

[Neville]

I love the scent of pine & the sight of fireflies dancing is one of the very real wonders of the natural world and one I miss since selling villanevajilla in Bulgaria .. wot a delightful treat having just got home from work and about to put up me feet .. Neville :)

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased this poem reminded you of your mountain retreat.I have yet to see fireflies in the real. I can only imagine what an incredible sight that would be. Thank you Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

a real pleasure .. treasure .. Neville

[NormaZ]

Love the image of the fireflies! So much fun in this uplifting poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Norma for your encouraging review. So pleased you enjoyed my poem. All the best.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

WOW, wouldn't that be something spectacular.... and the scent would be intoxicating...

Lovely imagery here Chris :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Stella. An old poem out for an airing. Pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a good start to the week.

Chris

[Vol]

Chris,
Would that not be nice! My father was never one to frolic, and I understand why... he was s child of the Depression and in the Marines on Iwo Jima, either of which would darken your windows. But I have also seen him and my mom cut a precise rug, every step well learned at an Arthur Murry school... That big band swing, so I know he would have liked to cut loose... Maybe crossing the bridge freed his heart, and lit a little fire under his feet and wings.
Vol
Vol

[Chris Shaw]

What a lovely thought Vol. My mum and Dad used to jive. We loved watching them in our younger days. Those fire flies were having a whole lot of fun:)) I couldn’t take my eyes off them. Have s good weekend and many thanks for stopping by.

Chris

[Vol]

Always a pleasure, Chris...
Vol

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful imagination. If, it will be like....I don't know. Good poem

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Arundass. My imagination went into overdrive. I was happy with the results:)

Chris

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Dear lady, Chris,

Beautifully and most majestically, wonderfully, expressed words of tribute's memorial to all those whom every person, as a fellow Human Being has lost in this place whereof we consider as Life ...

Marve

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Marve for your words of appreciation. Most kind. Have a lovely weekend.

Chris

[Thomas W Case]

Wow, pine carries such a scent. It immediately evokes images for me. Excellent work.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Thomas for your encouraging review.

Chris

[Sherice]

I like it! I know that is not much of a review, but I don't have much experience with poetry. I'm starting classes next week for my MFA in Creative Writing, and there are a few poetry classes I have to take, so I will be reading a lot of poems to help myself learn. Thank you for sharing!

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Sherice, so pleased you stopped by to read and leave your thoughts. Good luck with your creative writing classes. I hope you stay on writerscafe.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Timelessness of heaven's potential...This would be an unbelievable celebration of their souls, plus the everlasting scent of pine, which I love...( have all the the candles)... you dear Chris have an amazing imagination to have put this creative poem together....and it would be memorialized forever.....
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

Betty you always offer so much encouragement in your reviews. I am truly thankful to you.
read moreBetty you always offer so much encouragement in your reviews. I am truly thankful to you.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

I will; I need it too! You're very welcome Chris!!!
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Betty , that drat read more keeps popping up automatically after responses. It sounds so cheeky lol. Have a good day.