Reluctant Return

Reluctant Return

A Poem by Chris Shaw

too late today with timing
to see rolled hay bales
in cut meadow grass
they'd already gone along
with the crows in rows
that resembled musical 
notes upon a song sheet 
of September gold 

i hadn't wanted to pass
that place that made the
headlines shout out in winter
blues over a year ago 
since then the seasons have
arrived and left like that
coverlet of snow which hid 
the ground where he'd been
found

lifeless

teenagers with blades
with one slain and there in
his memory a youthful tree
branches decked with 
keepsakes and wind chimes 
gently swaying in a warm
breeze

a quiet corner of our 
valley's beautiful landscape
where such a violent act
a pact premeditated ended
in tragedy and stain
before long he will be
forgotten someone's much 
loved son a further statistic 
loose set in another day 
turned rotten

© 2022 Chris Shaw


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At the outset, let me compliment you on the stunning imagery in the following lines:

crows in rows
that resembled musical
notes upon a song sheet
of September gold

Reading this was so inspiring. A standard of writing we all aspire to.

The heart bleeds for these children taken so much before time. Indeed, such violence mars the beauty of all creation. There is something so rotten in the world for this to happen. It's so against the grain of Nature and all things beautiful.

A poem filled with such beauty and compassion!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Another apology from me DIVYA. I don’t know what happened three weeks ago, but I appeared to have .. read more
Ayvid N

1 Year Ago

Awww...No worries at all, dear Chris!
I know how much you care and I feel blessed to have you.. read more



Reviews

At the outset, let me compliment you on the stunning imagery in the following lines:

crows in rows
that resembled musical
notes upon a song sheet
of September gold

Reading this was so inspiring. A standard of writing we all aspire to.

The heart bleeds for these children taken so much before time. Indeed, such violence mars the beauty of all creation. There is something so rotten in the world for this to happen. It's so against the grain of Nature and all things beautiful.

A poem filled with such beauty and compassion!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Another apology from me DIVYA. I don’t know what happened three weeks ago, but I appeared to have .. read more
Ayvid N

1 Year Ago

Awww...No worries at all, dear Chris!
I know how much you care and I feel blessed to have you.. read more
A truly beautiful elegy Chris superbly penned and delivered ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thanjs fir your ki dness Tony. You are appreciated.

Chris
Ouch. I need more bourbon to read this… yet we honor those lost to violence by remembering and even more by caring.

The poem ends on a sour tone too. I’m think it’s appropriate for the center circumstances as well.

I tend to try to resolve my emotions when I write and find some meaning it bright future… yet here, you show how powerful it is to let it bleed a little longer.

A powerful write.

Thank you for sharing,

Scott.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Scott. Sadly violence is almost coming the norm. Not the way I grew up. Showing signs of m.. read more
Your poem reads as though it came from the morning newspaper. What kind of world are we living in? Good writing my friend. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you dear Sharon and so sorry it has taken a week to respond to your thoughtful review. You are.. read more
Such wonderful discriptive writing that enables this reader to picture the scene and to imagine himself becoming a part of.
Thank you.
Rob Churchward

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Hello Rob, thank you so much for stopping by. Pleased to know that you enjoyed my efforts. All the b.. read more
Good morning dear Chris,
Oh gosh this is such a sad poem. I was moved by these lines "before long he will be
forgotten someone's much
loved son"
This is so very true...so sad and so true.
You really wrote the feelings of this young persons untimely death and the horror of it so very well.
Hugs, Lisa ...pouting rain since yesterday..much needed..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

You are so welcome... I am off to play piano and be ready for my helper to work on finishing up orga.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Enjoy your piano and don't work too hard :)
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Finished the underbid...100% and I am so happy with it... Day is ending so I am of to watch a movie .. read more
How many places will we all end up avoiding? I live in New Jersey, but it doesn't seem to matter. Every night on the news is more and more reports of senseless killings. We all seem to share this unbidden horror in New York, Colorado, California, Great Britain, and elsewhere. Surly it must end, I pray that it does.
Take care - Dave



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dave, somehow I missed responding to your lovely review, even though I read it. So sorry. Apologies .. read more
It is sad the way of the world is now days.
It is sad to see it full of violence and anger.
we all need more kindness in the world.
Liked your write, it speaks

Posted 2 Years Ago


Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Pleased you stopped by Kate. Many thanks for your thoughts.

Chris
dearest Chris… it seems that our World is mourning the loss of humanity… Our 💕 hearts are broken and we are helpless to change the Direction. There is always “Hope, Faith and Charity, but the greatest of these is 💗 Love”.
🙏 Amen, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Pat, what a terrible direction we are moving in. Such violence everywhere, even in places where.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Yes… for the Sake of the Children growing up… we will do our Best to keep them Safe from Harm. .. read more
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Gee
Again beautifully written, the first 8 lines my fav :))
Too much teen violence, what happened to a good old fashioned punch up to solve quarrels, most teens think they are gansta...pricks.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Yes a punch up and a shake of hands and it was done. How times have changed Gee. So much needless de.. read more

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Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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