Great Crested

(river observations)

grebes of the river
elegant water birds wearing
ornate plumed headdresses
put to shame members
of our own species who
fail to nurture their
young

a late brood in july
sees a mother ferrying
four dabchicks on her back
with apparent ease
while a proud father dives
beneath rippled surface
for breakfast bites

august hurries along
shows a growing family
healthy and adventurous
in the playground vicinity
where a parental eye
remains watchful
for hazards

on guard for red kites
hovering overhead
at the ready or sly pikes
rising from the underworld
unannounced as chicks
circle in innocence

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A great poem of observation along with a deep message. We need to nurture, protect and watch the youngsters grow. Many dangers surround them ofcourse. With a watchful eye, caring hands, protective spirit, they will be safe. Even nature has it's way of survival.
Live and let live and then soar up and up
Marvelous work.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Sami, thank you for your lovely review. We can learn a great deal through observation of nature. All the best to you.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well. You are welcome. Have a lovely weekend.

[Ken e Bujold]

a beautifully rendered scene of nature, combined with a moving testament to the nature of family and parenting. Great poem Chris.

Ken e

[Chris Shaw]

Your review is encouraging Ken. Thanks for your visit. All the best.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

family will always be at the core of existence for the birds....for humans, it seems family is disintegrating.
Split up families, deadbeat fathers not paying child support...
mothers and fathers on drugs...kids in the system.
the river is beautiful...and the birds appreciate it...they still know how....do we?

great piece, Chris...

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you J. The river is a place for quiet reflection which can raise many an issue. The chicks on the river aren't saddled with the negatives that plague our children in these challenging times. Rely appreciate your review.

Chris