Riding The Crest of a Wave

cradled in your arms
without a doubt i know
I can't travel that far back
though my heart song tells me so

soul pours forth its love
like a fountain overflowing
I embrace the ash of you
in silence not for showing

in birth i was your pain
in death you remain with me
until tomorrow's last farewell
when the tides will set you free

Reviews

[Lorry]

Don't know how I missed this one Chris, but beautifully written.
Gives me thoughts of how a woman brings us all into the world and the birth pain isn't the only pain they feel, but the pain of having to do better than the last generation did.
She did do an okay job though, didn't she? 😊
Beautifully penned, as ever.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for that lovely review. Yes. She did well. Very well. Hope you have a great Sunday.

Chris

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

“in birth i was your pain
in death you remain with me “
Dear Chris, these lines are so resonant and poignant, as is your entire deeply touching poem. Your mastery of language, flow, rhyme, imagery, metaphor, simile, alliteration is evident in every word and line. The passing of our mothers reshapes us around a wound that never heals. I feel your own heart and pervasive sense of loss here, as I do in my own self. Kindred pain and reaching. They are within us. Time and tides wait for no one, but endings can also be beginnings. Sending love and hugs to you my friend. Thank you for this evocative write.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Annette your review is so kindly received and your thoughts warmed my heart. Yes, it's a terrible wrench to lose a mother. Thanks so much for stopping by and for your love and hugs. I send mine to you too. All the best from across the pond.

Chris

[Carola]

wow chris, a lovely poem, this one would go well inscribed onto a parent's gravestone!
a great way with words reminds me of richrard's writing style.
cheerio carola
ps. my mother died not quite a week ago, 2 months short of 99 years, but there again we had not much of a connection.

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely thoughts you share here here Carola. I know you weren't close to your own mum, but sorry to hear of her death. She lived to a good age. My own mum was 89 when she passed. Always good to have a visit from you. All the best.

Chris

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Is this beautiful soulful poem of love for your mom or other loved one?. You ink wonderful poetry always. She's alive right dear? Kudos and best wishes Chris,

[Chris Shaw]

Hi Zay Zay. For my mum, who died in February, so still grieving her loss. Thank you so much for the read and I'm pleased you like what I have penned. I appreciate you.

Chris

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Oh so sad to hear, deep condolences, i recall the poem in which you said she wasn't that well . Take care and im always glad to hear of people who love their moms till end of life.

[alanwgraham]

This is the story of life and death that each one of us must face Chris and you have portrayed it well in your poem. I like the thought of the tide setting you free. Of course dealing with the death of a parent brings up the most intense feelings.
All the best,
Alan

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Alan for stopping by to review this poem. You are truly appreciated.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Love, we have known, Love, we had felt. Never forgotten.
"in birth i was your pain
in death you remain with me
until tomorrow's last farewell
when the tides will set you free"
The above lines. Said everything needed dear Chris. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you my friend. Pleased you called today. Hope your day is a good one. All the best.
read moreThank you my friend. Pleased you called today. Hope your day is a good one. All the best.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Chris.

[Gee]

This is so beautiful Christine and that you gave over your mum to that which you love would have had her smiling.
Hope you are keeping well.

[Chris Shaw]

All's well Gee. Hope same for you and yours. Tha ks fir your lovely review.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

This is the third time I've read this.

It's heartbreaking every time. It makes me cry. To know the end is unavoidable.

It's soul crushing. This is one of those reasons I Know you're a monster. It takes great skill to break hearts like that.... Chris Shaw you have some devil in you
We should have a wrestling match... (you might win)

[Chris Shaw]

Well now, you read this three times. I consider that quite can achievement to hold a reader's thoughts that long. Thank you for stopping by David.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

Three times is kind of a lot. Don't take it as too much of a compliment though, there was a time when good writers were more plentiful on this site. I wouldn't have had the time to go three deep on you a few years ago.

[Dave]

Chris this is so beautiful. The love we profess for those that have passed is so often the most poignant.

Take care - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave. Pleased you enjoyed the read. All the best.

Chris

[red93]

Yes indeed Chris a beautiful Tribute and one you will look back on and treasure when the pain of bereavement eases as it undoubtedly will.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Tony, I appreciate your kind thoughts. Have a good day.

Chris

[Vertigo Cat1111]

This entire poem is gorgeous, but that last stanza is haunting and beautiful, just ties the whole thing together. The rhyming is impeccable and the palpable feeling of that deep ingrained, everlasting love is intense and perfect. It’s comforting and strong all at the same time. It’s nostalgic and heartwarming. Thank you for sharing.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Cat for your very encouraging review. Made my day you have.

Chris