This one could be read as an antidote to a stressful day's work and then a bout of evening rush hours traffic. The word pictures conjure up images of peacefulness in the mind. And, as the poem states, they are all without charge. Forget the iPhones and just go outside for a while.
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Thank you John. Yes, free of charge and wonderfully uplifting. Get outside and put those IPhones dow.. read moreThank you John. Yes, free of charge and wonderfully uplifting. Get outside and put those IPhones down:) A message really for the young. I think us oldies know how to appreciate a breath of fresh air.
My sort of poem , nature is free , lovely wellwritten Chris
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Good morning Stuart. Thanks for reviewing. I have to say this Monday morning isn't quite so pleasing.. read moreGood morning Stuart. Thanks for reviewing. I have to say this Monday morning isn't quite so pleasing. Pouring with rain at the moment. Hope your day is a good one. All the best.
I used to live in Berkshire , in Sunningdale , I went to Charters school ,love that place , shame it.. read moreI used to live in Berkshire , in Sunningdale , I went to Charters school ,love that place , shame it’s raining, I’m ok here ,
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Berkshire is a large county, so I don't know Sunningdale well. We live a hundred yards from the Oxfo.. read moreBerkshire is a large county, so I don't know Sunningdale well. We live a hundred yards from the Oxford border and close to the Thames. Yes still raining here. Pleased all ok for you.
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Hi Chris ,Oxfords nice , Sunningdale is next to Ascot racecourse , hope your rain stops
A very nice evocative write al fresco style detailing the joy of simple pleasures in beauty appreciated. I enjoyed.
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Many thanks Fabian. We live bkadder in challenging times sso must learn to appreciate the gifts we a.. read moreMany thanks Fabian. We live bkadder in challenging times sso must learn to appreciate the gifts we are given. I akwats find that the natural environment lifts me. Sending all good wishes for a happy weekend.
Just being an observer of nature can be way too peaceful sometimes and the poem itself depicts how much of a nature lover you are.
The imageries used in the poem is just so beautifully presented. You are indeed among the most inspirational writer i have come across in the website. Thanks a lot for sharing such beautiful works.
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Thank you for such an encouraging review. You've certainly lifted my spirits today. I appreciate you.. read moreThank you for such an encouraging review. You've certainly lifted my spirits today. I appreciate your visit. Happy Friday.
Good morning Chris,
Oh, such a lovely poem... Nature always at its best...no matter what.
Wonderful to be outdoors and smell the air and enjoy the trees, flowers, mountains, etc.
Nearby we have a a farmer with about 20 goats.. so when we walk we are able to view them.. Often there are new ones..so so small.. love it... Then, the other day a farmer (who speaks no english) pulled three huge sweets onions out from the ground and handed them to us through his fence... Now..this is what life is about!!!
And, one of the reasons we moved here...
Lisa
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Dear Lisa, thank you for your lovely visit. Like me you really appreciate the natural environment an.. read moreDear Lisa, thank you for your lovely visit. Like me you really appreciate the natural environment and fresh air. I love how your farmer gifted you onions. It is hot here today, very hot. Making the most of the morning. Happy Wednesday.
What a surprise...as it rained last night...ofcourse we had just watered and Bob had spent over an h.. read moreWhat a surprise...as it rained last night...ofcourse we had just watered and Bob had spent over an hour staying killer mosquito stuff around the house yesterday morning.. Ah well..
I am so happy that I was able to post two new poems and plan to post Guardian of Memories soon.
Oh, and it is rather hot here today as well..
Lisa
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I will take a look at your new work later today Lisa. Isn't that sod's law for you. Water the garden.. read moreI will take a look at your new work later today Lisa. Isn't that sod's law for you. Water the garden and then it rains:)
Nature has many great sights, aromas and sounds to offer, and most of us enjoy the sunshine, when it is there. I go for walks in the local countryside several times a week, with just my camera bag for company. Usually no more than a mile or two, but there is always something good to experience, from butterflies and bees visiting the flowers, to horses and cattle in the fields. And the trees - I am a great lover of trees. Nature can soothe our soul if we wander among her treasures at a leisurely pace. A fine poem, Chris, poetically rendered! I enjoyed the read!
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Thank you Robert, we share a love of nature. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Hope you are enjoy.. read moreThank you Robert, we share a love of nature. I appreciate your thoughtful review. Hope you are enjoying the hot weather.
Lovely thoughts and beautifully evoked Chris - I am assuming this is the Thames near Reading - beautifully done.
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Near Caversham Lakes. Views from the marina just off from the Thames. Thank you Tony. Hope your day .. read moreNear Caversham Lakes. Views from the marina just off from the Thames. Thank you Tony. Hope your day has been kind to you.
Trip to the DWP yesterday. I qualify for a £200 advance from the Universal Credit payments. Good ne.. read moreTrip to the DWP yesterday. I qualify for a £200 advance from the Universal Credit payments. Good news indeed !
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Good news Tony. Good to hear :)
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More Good News this morning Chris. One of the Agencies I am on the Books of - WB Employment - confir.. read moreMore Good News this morning Chris. One of the Agencies I am on the Books of - WB Employment - confirmed my employment with them. Obviously with the regrettable fall-out with Caroline I have not been available but WB were very good and they are looking for a Role for me now. I explained all about Caroline and WB were absolutely fine.
It is 2 months today since I left the marital home btw.
ohhhhh what a keeper says i! thank you for the "moment" ... i even put me naked feet into the cool of your river's mirror .. here in the Ozarks of AR it has been blistering hot ... 100+ for amost half of the past week and this morning .. around 5 AM letting Mr. Beau out .. it was soooooooooooooooo cool ... 60s .. off with the AC and open wide the windows and doors ... tho you celebrate the opposite ... i am thoroughly enchanted and lifted up in your poem .. thanks always .. for sharing Ms. Shaw!! :) peace on ya!
E.
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Dear Mr E. Your temperatures would be too hot for me. We had our own 90 degree day last Friday. I st.. read moreDear Mr E. Your temperatures would be too hot for me. We had our own 90 degree day last Friday. I stayed indoors till the evening. Yes early morning can be the best part of the day. I bet Mr Beau enjoyed his early start. Pleased I transported you and your toes took a dip in the Thames and you enjoyed the moment. Sending all good wishes across the pond with my thanks for your visit.
Chris,
What a lovely picture you paint here! The gentle imagery, reinforced by the use of the many sibilants, whispers of the calming, warming natural beauty of the scene. We have had an unusually chilly June here in eastern Washington, US, also, making mornings like you’ve described rare this year, and all the more precious. Beautifully done!
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Dear Richard, many thanks for your encouraging review. Pleased you enjoyed a morning by the Thames a.. read moreDear Richard, many thanks for your encouraging review. Pleased you enjoyed a morning by the Thames and I hope your own weather improves soon. All the best from across the pond.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..