Sowing Seeds

Sowing Seeds

A Poem by Chris Shaw
"

(an early attraction to gardening)

"
don't dig in the dirt
but she did and with a stick
or a stainless steel spoon or
anything else for that matter
she could find

which would allow her to scoop
or tunnel where often or not
slithering blind earth worms
appeared on the surface as if
by magic

wriggling writhing
greyish pink in colour
in ones twos or threes entwined
in their acrobatic paradise
exposed to daylight

working the soil
adding nutrients incorporating air
to provide foundations required for
new plant life to flourish
and grow

so that a single pink hollyhock
a splash of bright in a dismal 
garden would find itself in company 
of marigolds golden and warm
smiling in summer 

© 2022 Chris Shaw


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brought back so very many of my own treasured memories of digging in the muck n popping seeds into the holes made by my grandfather & my fathers very own thumbs when I was a kid .. I just wish I had done more of the same thing with my own, when they were growing up .. and I do so still love a pink hollyhock :)

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

I am delighted that Jahkai my two year old grandson asks his Nan for the watering can so he can give.. read more



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It is enjoyable to create and nurture. I think most people have this horrible dialogue they keep in a constant loop inside their heads from day to day that ends up breaking them down. This act of sowing and reseeding can reset all that. Bring us back down to what matters. That may not be the intention of your poem that brings that thought to light, but the rhythm and the color of your words took me to a nice spot. Got me thinking. Pushed the darkness away a little bit. Thanks Chris. Great poem! CD

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Pleased that a little of the darkness has been pushed to one side CD. Pleased you stopped by.
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This is such a "springy" poem and so lovely written. It's a positive piece that offers visions of a colorful Spring ablaze with color from the flowers that bloomed from...digging in the dirt. An enjoyable read Chris!
Temp

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your positive and encouraging review Temp. You are appreciated.

Chris
dearest Chris… we are earthly creatures that move the Soil to breathe and expose the Sun and rain to fall. Hollyhocks and Marigolds were in my family’s Garden… and I followed their Almanac. Earthworms mean the soil is fertile. and of course worms help us Catch Fish as a Main Course. Roger has had Medical procedures and is healing slowly but surely to ensure Dialysis is flowing smoothly. Flowers Grace our Home inside and out. The Birds swoop across our Yard and sing Merrily. Your Poem is my Cup of Tea, Indeed. 💗 love across the Waves.. Pat

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Pat, so pleased my poem is your cuppa tea. Flowers and birds gsther round you. Wishing Roger a .. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Thank you Chris... never a dull moment... as we go through the Chapters in our Life. On July 15, 20.. read more
this is so satisfying to read...the start, the growth...a beautiful garden which I know you always have, my friend.

j.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

I do love my garden J. From humble beginnings:) Don't see as many earth worms these days though.
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An apt poem for the advent of Spring, Chris. We have done quite a lot of repotting and new plantings and moving stuff about in our pot garden since these days we live in the middle of a city. Gardening continues in many unlikely and all places. Thanks for sharing this vibrant poem. Frederick.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Frederick, I have been spending quite a but of time in the garden myself. I do love container.. read more
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Les
Lovely writing. There’s something almost primeval about digging in your garden and connecting with the earth. Wonderful.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Les for your lovely review and for stopping by. Have a great Sunday.

Chris
Les

2 Years Ago

My pleasure, Chris. Enjoy your Sunday likewise. 😊
There is msgic in your words that capture that wonderful feeling of being st one with nature in order to bring new life into this word.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dale for your encouraging thoughts. Pleased you stopped by.

Chris
Lovely write, reminds me of spring flowers and the house my husband and I use to own, He planted all the beautiful trees and made a garden of tulips that sprung up every year. We had this beautiful bush that would flower beautiful purple flowers that almost looked like roses. Thanks for sharing your words ;-}

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Weeping willow for that lovely share of happy memories Tulips are beautiful flowers. Your .. read more
Love the imagery and the story it tells. Made me think of my grandmother.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Karen. Pleased you had memories of your grandmother while reading my poem. I was living wi.. read more
KAREN

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Lovely Chris, speaking as a still learning gardener. I'm always poking about amongst my veg and your superb image of the wriggling worms is spot on. One thing I really enjoy is taking my wee grandsons on hunts for snails and all the bugs hiding in the garden.
All the best,
Alan


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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

I love that you take your grandsons on adventure trails looking for snails and bugs Alan. What fun f.. read more

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