Saturday Cake Bake

Saturday Cake Bake

A Poem by Chris Shaw

happiness came in stone coloured  crockery
in a pudding bowl with a wooden spoon
with each stirring of something special

creamiest of mixtures worked and poured
into baking tins placed high on oven racks
timed to rise to light and airy perfection

kitchen aromas drifted into the sitting room
where Ernie sat in his comfy chair
busy making roll ups in front of a red glow fire

tissue thin paper sandwiched a pinch of baccy
pressed and rolled into shape then finished with  
spit lick before being stored in an old tin

but the best bit of all for a seven year old fidget
the remains left in the bowl of plenty
handed over by nan with a smile and a wink

© 2022 Chris Shaw


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Yes who doesn’t love the last lickings?, almost every child that I know, what a nice take family togetherness and warmth and love for each other….and it’s also fun to cook together as well…..and then Ernie busy making his rollups and gently putting them in a tin……the glow of the fire tops it off….warm a cozy Chris!
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Betty. I appreciate your kind review. All the best.

Chris
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

you're very welcome dear Chris
hope all is well'
Best, B



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Yummy! In the tummy. A bowl of plenty never empty.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Little things please little minds and yes the left over cake mix was yummy :) Thanks Bill.
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Them are the best memories! I remember licking a bowl a few times. Nice job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Karen. Pleased you could relate to this little poem. I appreciate you stopping by.
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KAREN

2 Years Ago

My pleasure!!
This was fun to read and memories of licking the spoon or bowl filled my mind! Great poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Many thanks Kathy. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. All the best.

Chris
KATHY SUE SILLS

2 Years Ago

You are welcome!
My grandchildren would live this If they read it.There's be memories of me complaining that everyone was being spoiled, except me and it isn't fair! Did they share it? Not a chance, but I can taste it now. Lovely!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Bryan. You made me smile. Pleased you could relate to this poem. Have a good Tuesday.
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I remember having the remains of the delicious Cake Mix… “finger lickin good”. And then some… Yummy, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Pat, so right. Finger lickin good. Isn't it strange the memories that comeback to you years lat.. read more
I read below that you were on a nostalgia trip. So much nostalgia baking away in this one. Wide appeal, I would imagine, as there must be many people who can connect with such sense imagery and memories. Inspired to bake a cake today now, if only for that aroma wafting through the house. Thanks for a beautiful journey with this write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Brad. Pleased you enjoyed my nostalgia trip. I appreciate you stopping by.

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yummy .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Oh yes it was yummy Dave. Little things pleased little minds:) Thank you for stopping by to say hell.. read more
Such nostalgia, Chris! Love the comfy feeling this exudes. My mother in law called the batter scraper a “child cheater”. All the kids hoped she wouldn’t use it so they could partake in the licking the bowl and scraper. :))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Isn't it strange how these little things bring back such nostalgia. Love your review Temperance. Man.. read more
I am really itching with my sweet tooth.
j.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Ha! Go find something sweet to eat J. Sounds like you need a sugar surge :)
A nice piece of nostalgia! The final stanza made me smile. I never helped my mother bake a cake, but my two sisters did, and we all had turns at finishing the remains from the bowl!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Robert. Funny how these memories come filtering back. My mum never let me finish the remains .. read more
Robert Haigh

2 Years Ago

Sorry to hear you lost your mum recently. I lost mine long ago, when she was just 48. My father pass.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

I lost my Dad 31 years ago, my mum in Feb and my brother seven years ago. Yes, that feeling of it's .. read more

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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