Saturday Cake Bake

Saturday Cake Bake

A Poem by Chris Shaw

happiness came in stone coloured  crockery
in a pudding bowl with a wooden spoon
with each stirring of something special

creamiest of mixtures worked and poured
into baking tins placed high on oven racks
timed to rise to light and airy perfection

kitchen aromas drifted into the sitting room
where Ernie sat in his comfy chair
busy making roll ups in front of a red glow fire

tissue thin paper sandwiched a pinch of baccy
pressed and rolled into shape then finished with  
spit lick before being stored in an old tin

but the best bit of all for a seven year old fidget
the remains left in the bowl of plenty
handed over by nan with a smile and a wink

© 2022 Chris Shaw


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Yes who doesn’t love the last lickings?, almost every child that I know, what a nice take family togetherness and warmth and love for each other….and it’s also fun to cook together as well…..and then Ernie busy making his rollups and gently putting them in a tin……the glow of the fire tops it off….warm a cozy Chris!
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Betty. I appreciate your kind review. All the best.

Chris
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

you're very welcome dear Chris
hope all is well'
Best, B



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Lovely sensuous imagery with this one Chris - how well you call up yr memories, both good and bad, and bring them into the light of the Present - Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Many thanks Tony for your encouragement. Have a great weekend.

Chris
This sounds autobiographical but it is also cosy and wonderfully put together.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

So pleased you enjoyed this childhood memory Ken. Thank you kindly for stopping by. All the best. read more
Yes who doesn’t love the last lickings?, almost every child that I know, what a nice take family togetherness and warmth and love for each other….and it’s also fun to cook together as well…..and then Ernie busy making his rollups and gently putting them in a tin……the glow of the fire tops it off….warm a cozy Chris!
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Betty. I appreciate your kind review. All the best.

Chris
Betty Hermelee

1 Year Ago

you're very welcome dear Chris
hope all is well'
Best, B
The first section reminded me of grandma's kitchen when I was a little kid, during the winter holidays.

Good memories.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Dennis. Delighted that my poem gave you good memories. Pleased you stopped by.
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Dennis Wolf

1 Year Ago

No problem.
Cheers
I remember something like this only with the cake batter and then the frosting bowl. Yummmmm.
This was fun Chris.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you will. Pleased you enjoyed this yummy memory.

Chris
Delicious bit of spoon licking Chris. Have you more?

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Ha! Thank you Winston. Amazing how so many own up to loving the scraping of the pudding bowl. Please.. read more
Such warm memories of times past but still enjoyed. This is so familiar and homelike. I can feel the warmth joy of family.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Soren. Pleased you enjoyed the memories. Your review much appreciated.

Chr.. read more
I remember getting to "lick the spoon" after Mom stirred up the cake...home made of course! Thanks for bringing back happy memories in this well written work. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sharon. Licking that spoon and bowl certainly seems to have universal appeal. We all liked.. read more
i spent many a day licking the beaters my mom used to mix ingredients, my favorite was a lemon cake mmmgood. thank you for this memory.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Pleased to share this memory which seems to have universal appeal. Thank you DM for checking this on.. read more
This deserves a second visit
I have enjoyed cleaning out the remains of many a bowl of icing made for those cakes
If you come up with an extra double chocolate smothered in icing I will slip sown to the airline departure terminal and be right over

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

Very pleased you came back for second helping. Really surprised at the appeal this poem has receive.. read more

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Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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