Earth's Salt

Earth's Salt

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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(memories of the fifties)

"
salt of the earth was Freda
a hard grafter who survived
doodlebugs in the blitz

never without a radiant smile
coty lipstick applied thickly in hot
pink layers perfectly blotted

saturday mornings she shopped for
confetti bought in woolworths
because she loved a good wedding

it mattered not a jot that she didn't
know the groom or his bride
she would wait patiently 

standing outside the church
so she could shower the newly weds
with her congratulations

and a handful of eccentricity
salt of the earth was Freda
salt of the best earth

© 2022 Chris Shaw


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Wow what a character was this lady and related to you too did you inherit her traits from her distant genes
I would of loved a great Aunt or similar like Freda
It reminded me of how Maude went to funerals and was standing in yellow bright ware (from Harold n Maude) only your Freda went to weddings
Enjoyed this !

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Julie. Freda was my paternal grandmother. Quite a character. Had a heart of gold, made her ow.. read more



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What an interesting piece Chris. This put a huge grin on my face and what a character your grandmother must have been. A huge heart indeed. A beautiful selfless act. Another great write my friend.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Many thank yous duff. Happy this poem made you smile. My grandmother grew her own happiness :) This .. read more
I love the portrait you sketch here, dear Chris. The one thing that struck me while I read the poem was the lack of ego and hangups people had back then in being there for others. The times were simpler and people were just less reserved, kinder and so much more affectionate than they are now. This was a very enjoyable and an outstanding read!

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear DIVYA, life was simpler then, far less complicated and people had no money. My grandmother grew.. read more
A wonderful poem for dear Freda.
"and a handful of eccentricity
salt of the earth was Freda
salt of the best earth"
The above lines. Are amazing dear Chris. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Coyote. Freda was special. She is remembered with much affection. She knew how to fin.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

We need people to give us strength dear Chris. Freda was special and you are welcome.
this is lovely
love the way you have composed this
love the language and the visuals
this was like a lucky dip and I came up trumps
my time well invested here

LOVE FREDA - how lucky anyone is to get married with Freda close by XXX

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Hey KWP, so pleased you enjoyed this little bit of nostalgia. One of several I am working on. Thanks.. read more
I do not know why Chris, but as I read your sweet poem I had chills and tears in my eyes..
Your description about this moment in life is wonderful.
I know Coty lipstick...brought back memories.
Really so loved this write of yours,
Lisa, in Spain

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Lisa, thank you so much for that lovely review. Freda was my paternal grandmother, so she and h.. read more
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome!!
Good morning..
These are my kinda people!! and we need more of them. I don't know "Freda," but I love her :-) These smiling heart souls are a blessing to the world. I enjoyed this poem and all its good feels.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Your review Susan leaves me with a smile. Freda was my paternal Grandmother. She was a blessing to t.. read more
Reading a Novel is good for the Heart 💜 and Soul… where ever we wander we witness Romantic celebrations… of course we want to celebrate and throw Confetti… We are Birds of a Feather… tenderly, Pat

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dearest Pat, your birthday on Apr 23 is the same day as we celebrate St George's day. He is the patr.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Chris... Monday April 25 will be a special day for you. My husband Roger and his sister Pri.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend :)
Sounds like Freda was quite a woman. She lived by her own rules and just enjoyed life. We could all stand to be a bit more like her! Such a lovely image you have created with your words, Chris. Lydi***

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi**. She made her own happiness and it was infectious. Really appreciate you stopping b.. read more
Another special one
Wow what a character was this lady and related to you too did you inherit her traits from her distant genes
I would of loved a great Aunt or similar like Freda
It reminded me of how Maude went to funerals and was standing in yellow bright ware (from Harold n Maude) only your Freda went to weddings
Enjoyed this !

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Julie. Freda was my paternal grandmother. Quite a character. Had a heart of gold, made her ow.. read more
what a wonderfully worded tribute this is
full of imagery full of respect full of affections

you have done it again ... stunningly beautiful

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your encouragement Keith. A tribute to a really lovely woman who counted her blessings.. read more

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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