What a nice poem you shared here...the music, the dance and these things surrounding life!You portrayed a vibrant day filled with laughter and joy...very much enjoyed this.
I don't know how many days I will be here...perhaps the purpose of my returning has meted out....
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I hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued s.. read moreI hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued support of my efforts 🌹♥️
I agree with Fabian...this is fabulous! (vibrant citrus roses energized her eyes alive with emerald smiles) Now THAT'S beautiful poetry my dear. ~Sharon
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Thank you dear Sharon for your lovely review. A special memory for me.
This is fabulous. But I think you may have thrown the younger generation a learning curveball. I wonder how many will have to look up the word "stylus". We may have to format the replay in MP3, well, CD at least. (laughing) I really enjoyed the read. My sweetest memories are of dancing with my children.
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Thanks Fabian. You are so right, 'what' s a stylus, they will be saying". A very happy memory for me.. read moreThanks Fabian. You are so right, 'what' s a stylus, they will be saying". A very happy memory for me. All the best.
This was so beautiful and felt full of love and nostalgic memories. It’s so graceful, and I might say one of your best written ones. The poem almost has a beat to it, that lures you in and leaves you smiling. I loved the part about dancing and the way you ended it with plans for more the next day. A beautiful daily routine we could all do more. Grabbing your partner/s and just having a jive! Thank you so much for sharing.
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What a lovely review you have left me Vertigo Cat. This is a very precious memory of being at home w.. read moreWhat a lovely review you have left me Vertigo Cat. This is a very precious memory of being at home with my mum and dad. All good wishes.
How wonderful the memories! Could it only be that each of ours are as grand?
Thank you Chris for resetting the stylus.
Take care - Dave
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Thank you Dave. This is a precious memory from my childhood. Safe in the arms of mum and dad. All go.. read moreThank you Dave. This is a precious memory from my childhood. Safe in the arms of mum and dad. All good wishes to you abd yours.
This is really good, I enjoyed this write,
I could see my mom twirl herself across the floor with a baby in her arms singing along.
nicely written with wonderful imagery
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Pleased you could relate to this write Beckie. Thanks for stopping by.
I had this visual of mom and dad dancing on the record following the grooves spinning out of the way as the needle comes around again and again. Day after day their daughter's needs dictating the song of the day. Record of the year!
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Thanks Bill for your thoughts on a special memory for me. Much appreciated. All the best. read moreThanks Bill for your thoughts on a special memory for me. Much appreciated. All the best.
Hi Chris,
So loved this.. I own many vintage Vinyls from my younger days..
No replay in our lives.. Wish sometimes I could redo some things..or meet my husband sooner.
Little things like that..
Plus, reading your poem makes me want to hear how my new Sonos record player sounds..
Bought it and had it set up many months ago but still have never played any of my records on it..
Just been so busy starting our new lives here in Spain..
Lisa
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Thanks Lisa. Now you must make time for listening to your new Sonis record player. Make a point of t.. read moreThanks Lisa. Now you must make time for listening to your new Sonis record player. Make a point of taking some time away from your busy schedule.
Chris
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You are so right Chris..
I will do that today!!
Thank you for the gentle push..
maybe this kind of scenario could be coming back, Vinyl is.
spinning like a record on the turntable.
only life allows us just one play....
no replays...
so we better dance while we can.
j.
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Vinyl is certainly making a come back over here J and I'm all for dancing. Love the sound of the rec.. read moreVinyl is certainly making a come back over here J and I'm all for dancing. Love the sound of the record dropping, reminds me of the juke boxes of yore :)
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..