Replay

Replay

A Poem by Chris Shaw

stylus settles on
the turntable of my life
black shiny vinyl
giddy with memories
starts automatic

in the groove is dad
dancing laughing
twisting turning
teaching me
to jive

trad jazz
belts out loud
never mind the neighbours
we're having fun
brass band bonanza

he shows me how it's done
as he spins mum
like a top across
varnished
parquet flooring

her full cotton skirt
flounces
vibrant citrus roses
energised
her eyes alive
with emerald smiles

perspiration
builds on his upper lip
till the music
slips away

to allow me
to change the record
here comes a new day

© 2022 Chris Shaw


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What a nice poem you shared here...the music, the dance and these things surrounding life!You portrayed a vibrant day filled with laughter and joy...very much enjoyed this.

I don't know how many days I will be here...perhaps the purpose of my returning has meted out....

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

I hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued s.. read more
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I agree with Fabian...this is fabulous! (vibrant citrus roses energized her eyes alive with emerald smiles) Now THAT'S beautiful poetry my dear. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Sharon for your lovely review. A special memory for me.

Chris
This is fabulous. But I think you may have thrown the younger generation a learning curveball. I wonder how many will have to look up the word "stylus". We may have to format the replay in MP3, well, CD at least. (laughing) I really enjoyed the read. My sweetest memories are of dancing with my children.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Fabian. You are so right, 'what' s a stylus, they will be saying". A very happy memory for me.. read more
Wow Chris this is the best memory I’ve seen in a poem how precious

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Julie. Hope all is good with you in your world. All good wishes.

Chris
This was so beautiful and felt full of love and nostalgic memories. It’s so graceful, and I might say one of your best written ones. The poem almost has a beat to it, that lures you in and leaves you smiling. I loved the part about dancing and the way you ended it with plans for more the next day. A beautiful daily routine we could all do more. Grabbing your partner/s and just having a jive! Thank you so much for sharing.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

What a lovely review you have left me Vertigo Cat. This is a very precious memory of being at home w.. read more
beautiful read. full of color and love. great!

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Many thanks Cheyenne for your visit. Sending all good wishes across the pond.

Chris
How wonderful the memories! Could it only be that each of ours are as grand?
Thank you Chris for resetting the stylus.
Take care - Dave

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dave. This is a precious memory from my childhood. Safe in the arms of mum and dad. All go.. read more
This is really good, I enjoyed this write,
I could see my mom twirl herself across the floor with a baby in her arms singing along.
nicely written with wonderful imagery

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Pleased you could relate to this write Beckie. Thanks for stopping by.

Chris
I had this visual of mom and dad dancing on the record following the grooves spinning out of the way as the needle comes around again and again. Day after day their daughter's needs dictating the song of the day. Record of the year!

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Bill for your thoughts on a special memory for me. Much appreciated. All the best.
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Hi Chris,
So loved this.. I own many vintage Vinyls from my younger days..
No replay in our lives.. Wish sometimes I could redo some things..or meet my husband sooner.
Little things like that..
Plus, reading your poem makes me want to hear how my new Sonos record player sounds..
Bought it and had it set up many months ago but still have never played any of my records on it..
Just been so busy starting our new lives here in Spain..
Lisa


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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Lisa. Now you must make time for listening to your new Sonis record player. Make a point of t.. read more
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

You are so right Chris..
I will do that today!!
Thank you for the gentle push..
maybe this kind of scenario could be coming back, Vinyl is.
spinning like a record on the turntable.
only life allows us just one play....
no replays...
so we better dance while we can.
j.

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Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Vinyl is certainly making a come back over here J and I'm all for dancing. Love the sound of the rec.. read more

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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