What a nice poem you shared here...the music, the dance and these things surrounding life!You portrayed a vibrant day filled with laughter and joy...very much enjoyed this.
I don't know how many days I will be here...perhaps the purpose of my returning has meted out....
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2 Years Ago
I hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued s.. read moreI hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued support of my efforts 🌹♥️
what utterly delightful memories poemed and shared .. made me hark back to Sunday evenings in the P household many moons ago .. a real foot tapper Chris :)
What a nice poem you shared here...the music, the dance and these things surrounding life!You portrayed a vibrant day filled with laughter and joy...very much enjoyed this.
I don't know how many days I will be here...perhaps the purpose of my returning has meted out....
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
I hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued s.. read moreI hope you stay Sima, but you must do what you have to do. Thank you for your continued and valued support of my efforts 🌹♥️
Awesome, music and dancing memories fill my head as well. So sorry if I repeat reviews but I forget where I left off and have a bit of fever. I’m also a bit far behind in my reading here.
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2 Years Ago
Repeat reviews are more than welcome dear Patricia. In fact second visits are an honour. Lovely to s.. read moreRepeat reviews are more than welcome dear Patricia. In fact second visits are an honour. Lovely to see you abd watch that fever.
Wonderful memories Christine. Tinged with sadness after recent events.
Hope you are keeping well :)
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2 Years Ago
All good Gee. Back home from Torquay after the funeral last Friday. Very sad but great to see all ou.. read moreAll good Gee. Back home from Torquay after the funeral last Friday. Very sad but great to see all our large family, with nephews back from Germany and the States. We had a full weekend. This poem is a very happy memory for me. Hope you abd yours are all well.
Lovely musical metaphor, but no need for last stanza.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you fior your thoughts Mike and for so many recent visits. Suggestions always appreciated. I w.. read moreThank you fior your thoughts Mike and for so many recent visits. Suggestions always appreciated. I will pay you a call soon.
dear Chris… my Mother was the Dancer if only in her Dreams. I can appreciate the Memories of family where Music brought the family together. My Father’s best friend Johnny could play Boogie Woogie on our Piano. If he knew the Tune he could play it by Ear. I believe Johnny gave me an attitude of making everything worthwhile. Your poem gives us assurance of the Spirit of Mankind… and like fine Wine will have a Bouquet of quiet moments when love and peace remain. gently, Pat
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2 Years Ago
Dear Pat, thank you for sharing memories of your own mum which I know are precious to you. This is a.. read moreDear Pat, thank you for sharing memories of your own mum which I know are precious to you. This is a very happy memory of mine. Have a lovely Wednesday.
Chris
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dearest Chris.. the fifth verse of your Poem could be a Sonnet “with emerald eyes”… so beautif.. read moredearest Chris.. the fifth verse of your Poem could be a Sonnet “with emerald eyes”… so beautifully expressed. gently, Pat
Really enjoyed this. What a beautiful memory, so full of life and warmth! I can almost hear the music. And I love how the ending is so up-beat - there is a sense of living fully in the present without letting the joy of the past slip away. I need to work on being less bitter about loss, so I really appreciate this perspective!
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2 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your visit Elyne. A childhood memory which is a favourite of mine. Our home wa.. read moreThank you so much for your visit Elyne. A childhood memory which is a favourite of mine. Our home was full of fun and laughter.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..