Eye of the Sun

(For Stuart Beattie Cullen, first anniversary, my brother-in-law)

as morning yawned

pale sun stretched out

sleep clung to fine cloud lashes

rock pond was dark

its surface still

no sign of welcome splashes

a perky robin came in sight

a visit unexpected

to quench his thirst

that little bird

thought he was undetected

you filtered through

a year has passed

like mist your soul has risen

while my sad sister's sorrowed eyes

have gained a lake like glisten

i'm sure your spirit sees it too

though waves of grief will soften

the love that binds the pair of you

is shatterproof and diamond bright

you're gone but ne'er forgotten

Reviews

[Neville]

an almost blindingly beautiful tribute & dedication combined and all encapsulated within a single poem .. I imagine Stuart Beattie Cullen was a fine man and will long be sorely missed .. I do by the way believe that visits from robins have a certain significance and can often sense the presence of loved ones whenever they appear ......................... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Feel like you do about Robins. My brother in law, sadly missed by all of us. Taken by the covid snatcher at 67. Thank you for your lovely review Neville.

Chris

[Mike Keenan]

Hi Chris,
The sadness and finite status shine through. I wonder how it might look if each stanza was shorter than the previous one. Just a thought. Cheers, Mike

[Chris Shaw]

I appreciate you stopping by Mike to share your thoughts. Many thank yous and best wishes.
read moreI appreciate you stopping by Mike to share your thoughts. Many thank yous and best wishes.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... some of our loved ones are Rich in Memories.
Roger's sister, Priscilla, passed last year. Since she had "Time" to finish two oil paintings that she sent to us... she was pleased she had finished three-- one of Spring and another of Autumn. The third was Winter with Red Roses growing around the Pond . We still need an oil painting of Summer. Pris may inspire me to do an Oil painting of Summer. There is alway a way of Celebrating our Loved Ones who pass the Pearly Gates. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

I remember your Pris passing last year as did our Stuart. They are never far from our thoughts dear Pat. I hope you are inspired to paint a summer canvas. Thank you so much for your visit houghts. Vsebdibg love across the pond.

Chris

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a sweet and gentle tribute, I was out very early this morning getting a cup of coffee at the corner store. I pulled back in my driveway and sat there sipping my coffee as I watched eight or ten robins march the lawn, tilting their heads and snatching up worms or bugs. What delicate sadness you weave here. The feeling of loss is palpable. Bless.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for stopping by Fabian and sharing your Robin story. They are such beautiful birds, a delight to watch them. All good wishes to you.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Your images of the morning are wonderful!! Soft and vivid and soothing; that said, your sweet memories return to your soul and you see them in your mind's eye as well. grief comes and goes, but but we do have calm moments such as these to reflect. It doesn't matter how long, when the moment comes we put on a smile.
Best, B

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Betty for sharing those lovely thoughts. Grief does come in waves, just like the ebb and flow of the tide. Hope all is good in your world.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome my dear poet!

[KAREN]

The imagery is breathtaking! Poetry at its best!!!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for stopping by and leaving such an encouraging review.

Chris

[KAREN]

You're welcome!

[Patricia]

Letting it all come back, slow but the beauty is coming back…in the world and in the memories, so beautifully expressed with so much endearing love, so strongly felt in such a delicate way

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Patricia for your continued support on my efforts. Have a good Friday.

Chris

[Dave]

To be remembered with such beauty and love. Surely the sadness of loss is diminished with the remembrance of such wonderful memories. A beautiful tribute - Chris.

Take care - Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave for stopping by to leave such a lovely review. All goid wishes.

Chris

[lightsong]

How time flies, a year passed... Moving, emotional and poignant dear Chris, also this radiates a gentle comfortable feeling, a touch of soft healing. another gem of your talent.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear lightsong for your kind appreciation. Yes a year passed and now sadly back into grief with the passing of my mum a couple of weeks ago. So difficult when those we love leave us. You have a great day.

Chris

[lightsong]

Gosh! I never knew that your beloved mother passed away. my warmest condolences dear Chris I know how much your mom means to You, I hope You are doing well through your time of grief and may her light keep shining on You. sending many peaceful hugs and gentle love❤️

[Chris Shaw]

Bless you lovely lady for your warmth and generosity of spirit. You are a gem.

[lightsong]

Blessing back in abundance to our elegant Lady ✨

[JE Falcon]

This is a lovely poem, so warm, sad, and true. --- And it is the way we live, here and gone tomorrow. But the sorrow only lasts for as long as the memories. Better, the good ones thought of.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your thoughtful review. All good wishes Falcon.

Chris

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A heart felt poem that pens grief so well!

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks for your visit. You are appreciated.

Chris

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!