Tattered, Torn and Somewhat Worn

Inspired by my dear friend Jabob's Avatar - written some months ago

would your thesaurus tattered

well thumbed and torn

consider a companion

who's equally worn

battered and bruised

with the passing of time

despondent with life

in a state of decline

do you think that their shelf life

could benefit from

a friendship of sorts

as we both work our pens

do you think they would chatter

and natter like we

about the world's state

and our own poetry

would they adorn themselves freely

with garlands of flowers

drink to the rain

of past summer showers

reflect on the sixties

the years we loved best

before those old pages

eventually find rest

Reviews

[Dylan Macadham]

Wonderfully nostalgic, Chris :) ...I'm a big fan of Nostalgia.
I miss my old tattered thesaurus, now replaced with a finger-click; he's around here somewhere, buried in a cardboard box, maybe wondering how ole tattered me is doin'.
Ever seen Woody Allen's 'Midnight in Paris'? ...If not, I guarantee you'll love it. I watch it about every 6 months. ( ... Golden-Age thinking :)

[Chris Shaw]

Nothing wrong with golden age thinking :) I haven't seen Midnight in Paris, will have to search it out, thank you. Thank you again Dylan fir your lovely review.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and after all these years, those synonyms still shout strongly from that old green thing.
Yes, the World's state of our own poetry...
nothing like words, nothing like variety of words...the old Thesaurus loves that....
I love this poem and that old green thing...it has sustained me for more years than I can remember.
with its duct-taped binding.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased you enjoyed this J. Mine is red, battered and bruised and it has served me well over many years. May your old green one continue to serve you too. Thank you.

Chris

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Incredibly moving words Chris and in many ways represents much of this community of amazing writers. Who share more than a love of art but also kindness, empathy, and friendship. Much like yourself who is always kind and encouraging to not just the many veteran writers here but also the new as well. You truly are a kind and gentle soul, as well as a poet to be admired.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Carlos for your very kind review. Yes WC is a wonderful place to link up with like minded souls. You also make a huge contribution to the forum. We are lucky to have you.

Chris

[Lorry]

Well, this does seem to fit Sunday reading somewhat, but maybe that's just the bleary eyed and blearier dulled guy I saw in the mirror this morning 😊
Being well worn is indeed a sign of love and affection, so why do we never prefix it to ourselves? We even call second hand books pre loved, so why not us too, or even three!!!
I must admit to being shocked at the avatar you talk of. Jacob uses a thesaurus??? I always thought he was some sort of oracle that just knew this poetry stuff the same way veins know blood. 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Ha. "The poor tattered thing in the picture is my thesaurus". That's what it says on Jacob's profile, referring to his latest avatar:)) It struck me as funny. Started writing this sometime ago, but just got round to finishing it. Are you feeling any better yet? I have heavy cold and horrendous cough for over a week, with not much sign of improvement. You take care up there over the border Lorry.

Happy Sunday.

Chris.

[Lorry]

Yes, had first negative test but was meant to get second result on Saturday. Still waiting.
Woke with a sore throat again, but little else in way of symptoms.
Hope you feel better soon Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Likewise. Hope you are symptom free soon:)