Tattered, Torn and Somewhat Worn

Tattered, Torn and Somewhat Worn

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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Inspired by my dear friend Jabob's Avatar - written some months ago

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would your thesaurus tattered
well thumbed and torn
consider a companion
who's equally worn
battered and bruised
with the passing of time
despondent with life
in a state of decline

do you think that their shelf life
could benefit from
a friendship of sorts
as we both work our pens
do you think they would chatter
and natter like we
about the world's state
and our own poetry

would they adorn themselves freely
with garlands of flowers
drink to the rain
of past summer showers
reflect on the sixties
the years we loved best
before those old pages
eventually find rest

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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Wonderfully nostalgic, Chris :) ...I'm a big fan of Nostalgia.
I miss my old tattered thesaurus, now replaced with a finger-click; he's around here somewhere, buried in a cardboard box, maybe wondering how ole tattered me is doin'.
Ever seen Woody Allen's 'Midnight in Paris'? ...If not, I guarantee you'll love it. I watch it about every 6 months. ( ... Golden-Age thinking :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Nothing wrong with golden age thinking :) I haven't seen Midnight in Paris, will have to search it o.. read more



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I'm a big fan of Nostalgia, I sometimes use a thesaurus, depending on what I write or if i want to sound smart...LOL Enjoyed this write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Kerra. I appreciate your thoughts and your visit.

Chris
An excellent throw back to those golden years of love, fun and laughter. I like the message too. Find someone even if they are not in their heyday of youth. You can gain maturity, wisdom and stability of life. It is never too late like they say.
I think friendship comes before true love.
Awesome!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are muchly welcome dear Chris.
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

.................. :))
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Javajavinga....
"adorn themselves freely
with garlands of flowers
drink to the rain
of past summer showers
reflect on the sixties
the years we loved best"

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend.
"consider a companion
who's equally worn
battered and bruised
with the passing of time
despondent with life
in a state of decline"


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sami.
Hi Chris, it can be so wonderful to look back into our past, whether it be joyful or sorrowful thoughts. I lost my thesaurus years ago, well, it was actually my dad's.never got a new one. You never know, I may find it somewhere in the house. Loved the content of this one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Hello Shadrach, many thanks yous for paying me a visit. I feel sure you'd like to come across that o.. read more
shadrach hah

2 Years Ago

maybe one day, Chris. It would be nice.
Simply a wonderful nostalgic read, I enjoyed this

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Katzie for your thoughtful review and visit.

Chris
I miss the good ole days, This is so wonderfully composed...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Kimmie for checking in and leaving a lovely review. All best wishes.

Chris
A real winner
Oh, for those good old days

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thanks Dave. You are appreciated.

Chris

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Chris Shaw
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