In Best Belief

(written four months ago and far from being resolved)

hearts weep in silence

eyes mist with pain

over and over

a record plays

when will we see you again

when will we see you again

my love

when will we see you again

when the last of birch leaves

flutter down

in a flurry resembling rain

till then my love

on hopes we cling

we'll sing a song of best belief

we'll sing a song of memories

and beg it's not in vain

Reviews

[mou]

'...when the last of birch leaves
flutter down
in a flurry resembling rain' -
You portray the emotions with this above line in such a vivid way, that I got completely carried away..
What a powerful imagery, dear Chris..
Sometimes, life brings some painful turns but with "song of best belief", this too shall pass, probably.
-mou.

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely, thoughtful review mou. Thank you for stopping by. It is good to see you.

Chris

[mou]

Always my pleasure..
-mou

[Patricia Wedel]

Sweet words to wish a safe return when Birch leaves
are falling again when the Rain gives Earth a peaceful Refrain...
until we meet again... tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, sorry for my late reply and many thanks for your encouraging one. All good wishes.

Chris

[Lisasview]

Good morning dear Chris,
I went back over all your poems to see if I could find one I had not reviewed..but I have reviewed all of them...Then I found this one that I decided to reread...Loved it as I did before..
Sing a song of memories..such a great line..
Lisa, Still raining here in Spain

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Lisa. I need to write some new ones, but have well over five hundred in my catalogue here. Thank you for your thoughts and a special thank you for reading this one again. That is so much appreciated. I am so busy at the moment, but pleased to say it is a sunny day here. We do need rain too, but not too often. Have a great day.

Chris

[Lisasview]

You are always welcome..

[Relic]

Your poems are always easy to understand and touching, Chris. There's lots of emotion and sentiment in this one. Covid pulled many people apart, for some it changed the course of their future.

Great writing, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tim. I want my poetry to be assessible, so you have paid me a huge compliment. Keep it simple, that's my mantra.

Chris

[Aluppi Jampur]

I love this one, Chris. So much feeling.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Chrome for stopping by. Your visit welcome and appreciated.

Chris

[light and ashes]

A really good write....Is it about a missing person?

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you light and ashes. Yes, this write was about a missing child. He was missing for five long months until the courts resolved the problem. Now we can see him again and what a difference that makes.

Chris

[Lisasview]

Wonderful Chris..
Love the line
We'll sing a song of memories..
Really able to see ...
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks for your continued encouragement Lisa.

Chris

Chris

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome and good early morning to you Chris. I finally submitted a few more poems..Feels good to share what I have written.
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

Will take a look later today. Have been away from home.

[Lisasview]

No worries

[Miss Sharon]

I agree with Mou...beautiful imagery in this one Chris. But then, that is one of you best fortes. ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Sharon for your lovely review. Wishing all the best for you. So pleased you stopped by.read moreThank you Sharon for your lovely review. Wishing all the best for you. So pleased you stopped by.

Chris

[AYVID N]

Falling leaves resemble a rain of sorrow and longing sometimes. Such beautiful lines for a loved one. This poem is so relevant in these sad covid times. Always so sad when life creates these distances and barriers and the heart asks over and over, when will we see them again. Yet we must keep the faith. This is such a gem of a poem, dear Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Your lovely reviews always offer encouragement, particularly at this time when my poetic voice has gone DIVYA. Thank you, thank you, thank you

Chris

[AYVID N]

So has mine...where have the words gone...?
I'll pray your muse returns to you soon, my friend. Your poetry is loved and looked forward to, always. You are most welcome! 🙋‍♀️💕

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow amazing poem. :) Nicely written

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for checking in and leaving a kind review. All the best.

Chris

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome

[poetgurl]

this could be song lyrics, I remember a song called
"when will i see you again"
This is wonderful, full of feelings.
I really like your writes

[Chris Shaw]

I recall that song too Lady K. I quite often find myself going lyrical. Can't sing though :) Many thanks for reviewing.

Chris