A Text Too Many

A Text Too Many

A Poem by Chris Shaw

out of the blue
from the forests of time
a message was left
it would be good to talk
.
concisely short
a bullseye dart
pointed and poisoned
it grazed on my heart
.
nostalgia it carried
on a cool autumn breeze
i remembered how once
i was brought to my knees
.
so what do you want
from your fine Surrey garden
maybe the chablis is
seeking my pardon
.
on a warm afternoon
i could easily be swayed
except i recalled
i was dumped and betrayed
.
so i chose to ignore you
and didn't reply
yet not without wiping
a tear from each eye
.

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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this is unusually good but not at all unusual .. and I don't mean that you just wrote a bloomin good bit o poetry .. its good to talk and from both a personal and professional perspective, I am acutely aware that so many problems start from the moment a silence is first conceived ..................... Neville :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you Neville Yes silence is golden at times and deadly at others. It seems I have a propensity .. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago


I take it I can stand down then and a hit is no longer required :)
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

:)...............



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Ada
Its ironic how oftentimes we receive closure in writing and poetry that real life situations could not give. Nice write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

So true Ada, thank you. All the best.

Chris
Even our phones can't shelter us from heartbreak. Viva la technology!
All jokes aside, pain well expressed here. Betrayal by one we idolized is hardest to ignore. Nicely written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Many thanks for another visit. You are appreciated MJS. Happy new year's day.

Chris
When the past comes calling (or texting) just tell it you're with your future at the moment and can't get back to them. (smile) I enjoyed this immensely. F.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Fabian and for the smile. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. All the best.

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dear Chris… I realize that this Poem is Close to my 💜 Heart.. I never was able to explain and so the Pain lingers.. but keeps me very Humble… Amen Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Pat, especially for sharing. Pleased you called in. Sending all best wishes.
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Been there. done that. You captured such feelings in a beautiful way.
Nicely written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

An experience many of us have been through. Thank you Melinda. All good wishes.

Chris
Oh my, yes! Been there and done that! Perfect! Have you been reading my mail? ;)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Many thanks Patricia. Yes, an experience probably most of us have experienced. All good wishes.
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Very, very nice. No one wants the hurt, much less to have the wound reopened. Made me think of a few moments of my own, articulated so much better than I ever could.
Thank you for writing this, so sorry for your pain.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you scribbler 62 for stopping by and leaving a review. You are appreciated.

Chr.. read more
Wow. I absolutely love this. 😪
Thank you for sharing..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by. Pleased that you enjoyed the poem. All the best.

Chris
Chris, I love this from you….an unhappy memory regurgitating from a poisonous note, something you wanted to forget was brought up again and it felled your heart….you really bring this to life with the words you chose to write…..no one wants to have a sting to their soul, written in a note to make you sad.
You really told him off Chris and now perhaps he will disappear from your life forever. Nice work!
Best to you, B.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Betty for stopping by to review. Love your new avatar. So nice to see a pic of you. A.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Thanks Chris, and yes now we both have faces to elevate our friendship…and you’re welcome too�.. read more

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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