this is unusually good but not at all unusual .. and I don't mean that you just wrote a bloomin good bit o poetry .. its good to talk and from both a personal and professional perspective, I am acutely aware that so many problems start from the moment a silence is first conceived ..................... Neville :)
Thank you Neville Yes silence is golden at times and deadly at others. It seems I have a propensity .. read moreThank you Neville Yes silence is golden at times and deadly at others. It seems I have a propensity to keep my mouth shut when most women can't close theirs for love nor money :) I have to confess I have since spoken to the subject of this poem who was fortunate enough to be my first husband :)
Chris
2 Years Ago
I take it I can stand down then and a hit is no longer required :)
Even our phones can't shelter us from heartbreak. Viva la technology!
All jokes aside, pain well expressed here. Betrayal by one we idolized is hardest to ignore. Nicely written.
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2 Years Ago
Many thanks for another visit. You are appreciated MJS. Happy new year's day.
When the past comes calling (or texting) just tell it you're with your future at the moment and can't get back to them. (smile) I enjoyed this immensely. F.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you dear Fabian and for the smile. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. All the best.
.. read moreThank you dear Fabian and for the smile. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. All the best.
dear Chris… I realize that this Poem is Close to my 💜 Heart.. I never was able to explain and so the Pain lingers.. but keeps me very Humble… Amen Pat
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2 Years Ago
Thank you dear Pat, especially for sharing. Pleased you called in. Sending all best wishes.
<.. read moreThank you dear Pat, especially for sharing. Pleased you called in. Sending all best wishes.
Oh my, yes! Been there and done that! Perfect! Have you been reading my mail? ;)
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2 Years Ago
Many thanks Patricia. Yes, an experience probably most of us have experienced. All good wishes. read moreMany thanks Patricia. Yes, an experience probably most of us have experienced. All good wishes.
Very, very nice. No one wants the hurt, much less to have the wound reopened. Made me think of a few moments of my own, articulated so much better than I ever could.
Thank you for writing this, so sorry for your pain.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you scribbler 62 for stopping by and leaving a review. You are appreciated.
Chr.. read moreThank you scribbler 62 for stopping by and leaving a review. You are appreciated.
Chris, I love this from you….an unhappy memory regurgitating from a poisonous note, something you wanted to forget was brought up again and it felled your heart….you really bring this to life with the words you chose to write…..no one wants to have a sting to their soul, written in a note to make you sad.
You really told him off Chris and now perhaps he will disappear from your life forever. Nice work!
Best to you, B.
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2 Years Ago
Thank you dear Betty for stopping by to review. Love your new avatar. So nice to see a pic of you. A.. read moreThank you dear Betty for stopping by to review. Love your new avatar. So nice to see a pic of you. All the best.
Chris
2 Years Ago
Thanks Chris, and yes now we both have faces to elevate our friendship…and you’re welcome too�.. read moreThanks Chris, and yes now we both have faces to elevate our friendship…and you’re welcome too💥💥💥
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..