Kismet

(a little light romance)

when our lips met in breathless tender touch

as eyelids drew their blinds on bustling world

let memories of that moment's state of bliss

reside inside our minds for all of time

as butterflies chased moonbeams in night's dark

two hearts entwined like grapes grown on a vine

while stars saluted pathways edged in bright

those feet were floating six feet off the ground

the axis of the planet came adrift

all sense of time departed when we kissed

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Chris, this is the memory of a special kiss. Your gentle words take us through special moments. Your lines flow so easily down the page, painting a canvas with such beauty. Wonderful poetry as always Chris.Definitely Kismet. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Mike for calling on this older poem. You are appreciated. All the best.

Chris

[shadrach hah]

You are welcome, Chris, I have always found that poetic gems can be found in older poems. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always....Mike.

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Something I can strongly relate to, yet I'm envious of anyone in this situation.

Great poem, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dark.

[Poetic Beauty]

Like grapes grown on a vine entwined...

If we are lucky we get to feel and embrace a love like this even if it’s only for a short bit.

[Chris Shaw]

Love is always worth it. Thank you PB.

[Poetic Beauty]

I definitely agree. I have had my fairytale love that will always beat within my heart. I need to write a new poem soon. Some interesting dreams as of late.

I am a romantic at heart and believe in the power of love

[.]

What a lovely title to describe the passion and romance attached with first kiss! May be the earth is rotating on its own axis but to that moment the world rotates on their love axis.... What a lovely poem is this

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Sima.

[Patricia Wedel]

Kismet.. as Fate would have us meet...
it was a chance to fall deeply in love.
The blending of two Hearts beating for
all time. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Pat.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh my, Chris...do I remember this!
First girlfriend, knees buckling...
when our lips touched...
I think mine were 12 feet off the ground.

"eyelids drew their blinds on bustling world"

like the Vogues' song "Five O'clock World"----what a great line that is.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Smiling at your memory Jacob. Thank you.

Chris

[Azifwecare]

Wow I can imagine finding that special someone that would make me feel this way. Incredible I bet. Beautiful poem there Ms.Shaw

[Chris Shaw]

Silent1, thank you so much.

[lightsong]

oh my dear lovely Chris, your romance is SO ROMANTIC so sweet so wonderful, and most of all so meaningful... you spoke of those high and rich feelings, those feelings that give beauty not only to us but to the world too. please write more of these :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you lightsong. Really appreciate the review.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Very romantic.I espeIALLY LIKE THAT PART ABOUT THE VINES.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dale.

[Yashika]

It's so beautiful, and in a way, calming to read. I love the way you write

[Chris Shaw]

Yashika, thank you so much for your visit and this lovely review.

Chris