Holed By The Sun

shafts of blinding brightest rays

break through disintegrating cloud

to gleam upon unsettled surf

bursting through blackened mass

holed with a gift of future promise

dusky sky stirs into spotlight action

angel waterfalls pour forth

liquid molten gold holds sail boats

in a loose embrace for safekeeping

upon choppy waters they dance to

inclement weather's moody tune

so small in a sea of vastness

in the vastness of a huge expanse

threatens ever threatening

searching with a menacing eye

reach out to grasp what's left

light is worth all saving when

darkness invades peaceful living

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Chris, another outstanding piece, the light is our hope and our life. I love the way you use the metaphor of the light in this wonderful piece of beautiful poetry. The light can ever penetrate the darkness in our lives, it gives faith, hope and life. I ever reach for the light. Such wonderful poetry, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

One of my own favourite writes Mike. Pkeased you left your footprint here. Thank you so much.

Chris

[shadrach hah]

You are welcome, Chris, Outstanding work. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Marina]

Your final stanza sums up our current days, i feel. There has been so much darkness for more than a year that grabbing hold of any slivers of light is required to get us through these troubled times. I sure hope that inclement moody weather breaks soon. The world needs more sunlight for the soul. Pretty as a picture poetry, Chris. 💛

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Marina, yes the past year has been horrendous. We have a shaft of light but sadly others don't. I am happy to see you returned to the cafe and pleased you have checked in to pay me a visit.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

smart and clever turn in closing says i! ... fine imagery ma'am .. your seascapes always inspire me .. but this one has particular power in the ",,liquid molten gold.." and those boats on choppy waters dancing .. really fine use of contrasts too ... especially the "...blackened mass ..." ... boy oh boy what a terror it can be when darkness invades with its fear, anxiety, confusion and doubt ... oh my ... one can be overwhelmed .. overcome even .. but for that one tiny mustard seed of Faith .. the light comes on .. and for those who listen and obey .. grows and dispels the darkness ... I have been reading such inspiring poetry this morning, Chris ... its just about breakfast time for me .. taking this poem with me .. and bidding the Cafe' adieu for another day ... luv on ya! happy to read your stuff always .. your a corker!
E.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for such a detailed review Mr E. Pleased you enjoyed this read. You are always so very generous. Yes there is alot of darkness here. But that shaft of gold is worth hanging on to. Hope your day has been a good one.

Chris

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it is Chris! and when the Light is Jesus Christ the holding on isn't a matter of me doing it .. cuz He does. ;) what is is it i read? .. something like "once we are in God's grasp, no power in Heaven nor on Earth can pluck us from it." paraphrasing by E. ;)))))))))))

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely thoughts. I envy you your strong faith :))

[Einstein Noodle]

it takes so very very little to make a major difference my friend ... my prayer of Faith at the beginning of my journey was the smallest of cracks in the door .. opened just enough and the Light floods in .. I said "Ok! If you are real .. I want you in my life" ... that was it. I began that moment to see how wrong I was and how we are not able to find God until we stop looking and hear that still small voice .. a light touch on the shoulder saying ... just turn around you idiot ;) I have been searching for you ... so we seek all the things to grow that relationship and try to let go of the things that don't .. a life long ongoing relationship ..sorry .. i get carried away sometimes .. peace and love Chris .. i have never been disappointed reading your poetry .. not once!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for those kind words :)

[Weeping willow]

Wonderful write as I enjoyed the flow of your words ;-]

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Weeping willow. Pleased you enjoyed the write.

Chris

[Melinda McQueen]

Dear Chris,
This is a lovely piece.
It has a nice flow.;
Nicely done.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Melinda. I appreciate your review and your visit.

Chris

[.]

So true, so true! Even a slightest ray can illuminate age old darkness, and saving those precious ray of light can show us path when wandering through extreme darkness..... Very beautiful poem

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Sima for your generous review. Pleased you enjoyed this write and you could relate.

Chris

[Remanence]

It is pretty obvious you have personally sailed through the high winds and heavy rains of a storm. Your reveal of what the stormy seas were like with the illumination by the light coming through the clouds is wonderful! Quite a capture!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Watercress. I think most of us have had to deal with stormy seas from time to time. Your thoughtful review is much appreciated.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... my feathers are ruffled when I behold the sculptures in the Sky with silver light peeking around dark holes... every day is a New Portrait of History in the making... we need Rain and no one is doing a Rain Dance ... except you... yourself. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat, many thanks for your lovely poetic review. We have certainly had much rain in these parts. Enough for you should you need it:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"inclement weather's moody tune"---love that line...

the personification in this makes it so lively in producing theme.

yes, there has been much darkness, but a hole has been poked into it and there are shards of sunlight starting to peek through.
we are reaching out....we have to.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you J. I hope the darkness has been punched through by light. Ever thankful for your support.

Chris

[Vertigo Cat1111]

You're so great at writing weather and areas! It makes you come across as a very peaceful poet who pays attention to every detail they see- and those are often the best poets. The littlest things in nature, such as dust floating around a window during the golden hour can sometimes be the most beautiful part of your day. Just peaceful and reminds you why life is worth living. That's how your poetry feels, always reminding readers of the beautiful things Mother Nature has created, such as the blue sky or the pouring rain. Thank you for always sharing your work and helping and inspiring so many people!

[emmajoy]

Words like yours mean so much. I really do treasure the All About. Thank you.. more than, Colacat

[Chris Shaw]

I agree with Em, this is a wonderful review. Thank you.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

It was my pleasure! (:

[emmajoy]

Exquisite, gentle.. peaceful.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Em for the praise :)