Ghost Trains

old songs strike a chord

gift briefly a home long gone

there lingers my soul

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

A lovely Haiku for us to read on my Eighty First birthday.
Music for our heart and soul... to be shared with my
Sweetheart and the breeze in the trees. Thank you
for sharing your inspiration.... lighting Candles one at a time... every hour...
would that take about two days ? lol. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pat many belated happy returns for your birthday yesterday. I hope you had a super day. I would light a thousand candles for you, you deserve it dear friend.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Chris... I am humbled by your blessing.
My daughter Edie and her daughter Maddie traveled to New Jersey for Saturday and Sunday softball Tournaments.
They stayed overnight Sat and Sun night to be rested and relaxed for the Games. Edie had the most gorgeous Biuquet of flowers

[Patricia Wedel]

Edie had the most gorgeous Bouquet of flowers delivered to my door on April 23 at nine am in the morning... white Hydrangea and soft pink Roses with yellow and orange Lillies. Roger and I
drove by the Rappahannock River with many Sighs of Beauty. Thank you for your
kind review. Please note ... there is a typo above ... should be softball Tournaments. Be blessed dear friend. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

How wonderful to have family visit and such a wonderful birthday bouquet. You must have had a marvellous time.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

Yes... if I stand up and turn around, 81 becomes 18 ...
memories tucked away... truly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Ha, that's the way to do it Pat :)

[Unspoken poet]

Ah, love haiku's, i have trouble with them, so this is wonderful

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Unspoken. Senryu and Haiku aren't as easy as they look. Quite a bit of effort has to go into a 5/7/5 totalling 17 syllables. Worth trying though. Many thanks.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you know my soul is in that home, Chris.
it is like I live in an oldies motor home.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jacob. Doesn't certain music just transport us back to places of great comfort?
read moreThank you Jacob. Doesn't certain music just transport us back to places of great comfort?

Chris