Birthday Flora

Birthday Flora

A Poem by Chris Shaw

cast them aside they said
once dressed in pearl perfection
those roses are undoubtedly dead
while tiger moon lilies look on
bruised and bemused

no longer gifting scent
memory of perfume pervades
in a room where blooms wither
petals turn paper thin
perfection long gone

heart cries no they stay
there is elegance in demise
they stand proud in a vase
whose clear cut glass gleams
my grey eyes cloud empathetic

they stand tall
flowers may lose colour
fade fast, nothing living lasts
though stems show backbone
in the face of adversity

behold broken beauty
in silent solace lingering
dignity dawdles towards death
dried out they may be
and soon to be but not yet
a reminisce

© 2021 Chris Shaw


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March 9th was her birthday. The beautiful bouquet still gives off its delicious aroma and the blossoms brighten the room. To see her face when she catches a glimpse of them each day she passes them is a joy.
Thank you for the wonderful, imagery you put in your writing.
Take care - Dave

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Good she had a birthday bouquet. Thank you fir your visit Dave. My best wishes.

Chris
Dave

3 Years Ago

You too, Chris.
Take care - Dave



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I hate buying plants that shall die. I buy plants that I must replant and they grow bigger. By my computer I have four Bonsai money trees that were one foot and now are four foot. Hello dear Chris from Michigan. Thank goodness, Michigan had some warm days. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. I tend to buy plants too. They last much longer and come back year after year. Flo.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Hello dear Chris and you are welcome.
I actually love the look of dried flowers. A few times over the years I have sprayed them with hair spray to preserve them and keep them a dry base because I like the way they look.

There is beauty to be found in many things. We just have to take a deeper look sometimes

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you for the tip PB. There was something so subtle in those decaying flowers. They were leaving.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Years Ago

I’m glad you liked the idea of using hair spray to preserve them.
dearest Christine... we also start out as Buds that open up and blossom in our own individual beauty. We gather the petals as they drop and perhaps make a scented bowl of memories... your poem has been a somber realization that we are part of Nature. tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

Good morning Chris... today is Thursday... yesterday was unseasonably warm about 80.. I bought a wee.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

I have also been buying plants Pat. Azaleas, which won't bloom until early May, but I too like to th.. read more
Patricia Wedel

3 Years Ago

dear Chris... my Mother Edith loved flowers and grew Red Cannons that grew tall. She raised Parakee.. read more
I think the flowers here are a metaphor for humanity. We too reach our resplendent peaks, but like all material things, our bodies begin the long slide toward exhaustion. That is why spiritual resources must be found before it is too late. There is nothing sadder to behold than roses withered and strewn.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Many thanks John, I appreciate you sharing your thoughts. Pleased to have you visit. Keep safe and w.. read more

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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