“from bleakest night comes brightest day
when rays of sun break through at dawn”
Beautifully penned lines dearest Chris. Your words float upon the day as a graceful prayer to Gaia, an extolling of her comfort to man, each morning renewed. Great message, imagery, metaphor, rhyme, cadence, alliteration… Master Class write my friend!
Posted 1 Year Ago
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1 Year Ago
Your review is warming on another really cold day here Annette. Thank you so much for sharing your t.. read moreYour review is warming on another really cold day here Annette. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and your encouraging words.
Life is cruel and generous in turn. Sad days come and go. We heal with gratefulness and move on with our loved ones. Its written, "This too shall pass" and I am a great believer of the Word. You're keeping the faith beautifully. I loved this uplifting poem, dear Chris.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Your review has left me feeling uplifted DIVYA. Thank you so much for checking in.
Ch.. read moreYour review has left me feeling uplifted DIVYA. Thank you so much for checking in.
we need the saddest hearts stirred..we need Gaia's calming influence....now more than ever.
as the Moody Blues sang..."sun is still shining, look at the view. Moon is still dining with me and you. Now that we're out here open your hearts"
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
I love the Moody Blues Jacob. They transport me to another era altogether. Back to a time when all w.. read moreI love the Moody Blues Jacob. They transport me to another era altogether. Back to a time when all was rosy in the garden. Good to have your continued support my friend and a big thank you for your review.
A lovely poetic prayer of thanx to our Mother Earth, dear Chris. No matter how awful our daily lives may become, our Earth Mother will always soothe us with the dawning of a new day, where hope and new possibilities are in abundance. As always, your rhyme and flowing poesy is soothing and makes for a wonderful, calming read. May more bright days dawn on your horizon! :))
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you Jamila for your thoughtful review. Your comments much appreciated. All good wishes
.. read moreThank you Jamila for your thoughtful review. Your comments much appreciated. All good wishes
You bring the brightest feelings of hope, bliss and peace... uplifting all the senses into that higher state of faith. what a magnificent piece dear Chris, specially I love the second verse and the ending, a spell of true tender magic taking the breath away and lift the hearts up. Thank You for these most blissful feelings shared ✨
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Dear lightsong, I couldn't have asked for a more positive and uplifting review. YOU dear poet always.. read moreDear lightsong, I couldn't have asked for a more positive and uplifting review. YOU dear poet always see the light when the dark hangs heavy. I so appreciate your visits. Thank you.
A very hopeful write here. After every black night dawn is a new promise... Likewise every new day is a gift and an opportunity to heal the wound. Thank you for this uplifting piece...
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Thank you for that lovely review dear Sima. We have many blessings even when the days are dark. You .. read moreThank you for that lovely review dear Sima. We have many blessings even when the days are dark. You are one of those to me.
Chris
3 Years Ago
I am overwhelmed... And you know quite well that you are that blessing to me .. ❤
Excellent example of blank verse here. It is a hopeful, comforting offering that assures us that in our lives, though they be bleak at times, dawn ever comes.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Many thank yous John for taking the time to visit and for leaving me such an encouraging review. You.. read moreMany thank yous John for taking the time to visit and for leaving me such an encouraging review. You are most appreciated.
Morning light from Earth Goddess Gaia is a promise that
the day will be woven into colors that blend with healing...
we thank her for her love... tenderly, Pat
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
We do thank her for her love and healing. She is a reminder that darkness doesn't last. It is tempor.. read moreWe do thank her for her love and healing. She is a reminder that darkness doesn't last. It is temporary. Many thank yous dear Pat for your visits and what you do to keep us all uplifted. You and your poems are a blessing to us.
Gaia and Helios both making their influence more felt each day as the magic of Spring waits just around the corner
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
It is just around the corner Dave. I keep telling myself that. The bulbs in the garden are making an.. read moreIt is just around the corner Dave. I keep telling myself that. The bulbs in the garden are making an appearance and I have pink hyacinths on my deck table. Within a month that table will be bursting with colour and life. Thank you for checking in with me.
I heard things have gotten cold over there and we are having a second day of lightish snowfall .. read moreI heard things have gotten cold over there and we are having a second day of lightish snowfall
have a lovely aft.
3 Years Ago
Ta, no snow here, just the remnants of yesterday. However it is glorious with sunlight but so very, .. read moreTa, no snow here, just the remnants of yesterday. However it is glorious with sunlight but so very, very cold :) Enjoy your day Dave.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..