since there is no logical parallel to what the world is experiencing, we have to turn to the poets to try and make sense of this. All of this. God commands this shelter from pain perhaps; this metaphoric proposition that not only occupies our grief but rolls back the stone of uncertainty if the angels are too busy.....dana
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Thank you Dana for sharing your thoughts. A welcome visit from you. All the best.
Chr.. read moreThank you Dana for sharing your thoughts. A welcome visit from you. All the best.
Oh, i am so sorry to hear he has passed.
Your poem says it all Chris, our hearts are grieving, not just for our own but for the all the souls this dreaful virus has so cruelly taken from us.
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Thanks Stella. The enemy is powerful, but can be beaten. We have the means to do it, but there will .. read moreThanks Stella. The enemy is powerful, but can be beaten. We have the means to do it, but there will be many more casualties.
This is a wonderful remembrance for an awful event
It must be a terrible shock to have this situation strike so close, leaving a family in such sorrow
These are certainly very difficult times
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The battle is in full swing. The enemy is powerful, but it can be beaten. We have the means, but it .. read moreThe battle is in full swing. The enemy is powerful, but it can be beaten. We have the means, but it will take more time and sadly many more casualties. We are just another family who knows its pain.
I love how you begin with a more broad suffering, emptiness, pain and mourning for 400,000 US deaths , not just us, but all around the globe, the greed of one leader, chaos, death never to forget;
Then you bring it a to more personal level, your dear brother- in-law, a loving person for whom you are mourning at present; “leaves a deluge of rain”
Excellent work, Chris...peace and condolences, Betty
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World wide and personal, the battle is in full swing. There will be many more casualties before the .. read moreWorld wide and personal, the battle is in full swing. There will be many more casualties before the back of this beast is broken. Thank you dear Betty.
Dear Chris,
Your words speak so totally of your heartbreak. This is something no family on earth should have had to go through. I fall short of words to express my deepest sympathies. May God lead you and your family through these darkest of days.
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We are one of many. A pin prick in an ocean sky. There will be many more who die before this beast w.. read moreWe are one of many. A pin prick in an ocean sky. There will be many more who die before this beast will be broken. Pin pricks hurt like hell. Thank you my friend.
Chris
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They hurt like hell indeed, my friend. I have loved ones there in UK and I know how dark it feel rig.. read moreThey hurt like hell indeed, my friend. I have loved ones there in UK and I know how dark it feel right now. I wish you and your family healing from the pain and peace of spirit. Stay safe..
How can i express my grief dear poet, my deepest condolence to you and your loved one.... A true poet can only describe a grief in such beautiful way... Hugs
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Thank you dear Sima for your heartfelt sympathy. I appreciate your visit.
Dear Ditzy, I thank you for your condolences on our loss. Please keep safe yourself my fav Kat. read moreDear Ditzy, I thank you for your condolences on our loss. Please keep safe yourself my fav Kat.
Treats for you..............
Chris
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You too, my dear friend. May God be with you and your loved ones in these troubled times. Stay Stron.. read moreYou too, my dear friend. May God be with you and your loved ones in these troubled times. Stay Strong.
This made me cry, it’s so painfully sad yet beautiful. I didn’t even read the dedication until afterwards and cried more. So sorry for your loss and I will keep you in my prayers HUGS
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Dear Patricia, I thank you for your kindness as we grieve. Many thank yous.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..