Spirited

a faltering flame

in a room filled with darkness

fights for love of light

Reviews

[barleygirl]

What makes this especially intense for me is the title, as it relates to the content. Spirited people are often the ones who take darkness the hardest. Just look at all the artists & musicians that die young. You've captured the essence of haiku/senryu perfectly: (1) expression thru imagery & (2) saying a ton with very few words (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

I couldn't ask for a better review on this senryu. Thank you Margie. Really appreciate you and what you do for this place.

Chris

[andrew mitchell]

How true as in life too Lovely brevity Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for checking in Andrew. Your thoughts appreciated.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just like a heart faltering,
fighting to find love
before it flickers out for good.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Love what you have said here Jacob. Thank you.


Chris

[Chance]

Lovely haiku open enough to be interpreted in many ways

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Chance. Pleased to meet you on my pag. All good wishes.

Chris