Lasting

Lasting

A Poem by Chris Shaw

for friendship is a cherished gift
it lifts, enriches, outlives time
.
when death destroyed your beating heart
it cast a shadow over mine
.
this morning as i sipped on tea
i swear i saw you wave at me

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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So touching piece this one, I just loved it. Friendship is a precious gift to treasure and cherish. Once a bond is created it remains with us forever. And no word can describe the void that lingers in our hearts when we lose that friend. I am quite touched by this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

A very special friend Sima who sadly died at 46 leaving behind three young children. She lived oppos.. read more
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3 Years Ago

So sad to hear this. Though her physical presence is absent but i know the eternal bond between you .. read more



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oh wow! precious write says i! into me ol' library this one goes ... you packed it with fine poetic ryhming couplets .. packed it with story and emotion ... really fine poetry ma'am!
E.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Dear Mr E, couldn't ask for a more encouraging review. So pleased you like this one. Delighted it wi.. read more
Nicely written Chris and again this is where short form Poetry scores everytime, leaving the reader to 'fill in the gaps'. Excellent use of half-rhyme as well.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you red93 for your encouragement. Means a great deal.

Chris
What an amazing write, right here. This is wonderful

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Kim. I appreciate your visit. Good to see you. Take care.
Lovely thoughts Chris, i am sure when we pass we do leave a part of our essence with those we were close to ....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Many thanks dear Stella for checking in. Much appreciated. Happy Saturday.

Chris
Stella Armour

3 Years Ago

My pleasure ..... :)
This is so beautiful. Friends are so hard to come by. I love the following definition of a friend:
A friend is someone who knows all there is to know about you and likes you anyway.

Take care -- Dave

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Dave and your definition of a friend is heart warming. Hope you are keeping well. Take goo.. read more
Dave

3 Years Ago

I am well and getting ready to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I hope and pray that you and yours .. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

We are going into a tier 4 lockdown tomorrow. Not allowed to mix with anyone outside our household. .. read more
"when death destroyed your beating heart
it cast a shadow over mine"- Such a thief, death. Such a thief, life too, at times. Really enjoyed this short piece...but with impact.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Diana, I appreciate your visit. All good wishes.

Chris
There are certain imprints on the mind that never go away.
A trusted friend is hard to lose. A part of you has died too.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Well said Tim. You are absolutely right. Thank you for your visit.

Chris
Powerful write. I could feel the emotion choking up my mind's eye as I read the end. Wonderfully penned!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Cyprian. Your visit most appreciated.

Chris
I agree dear Chris. Love and friendship outlive death.
"this morning as i sipped on tea
i swear i saw you wave at me"
Sometimes in my dreams. I talk to miss people. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and your amazing thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Many thank yous Coyote for that lovely review. Take care of yourself.

Chris
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Merry Christmas dear Chris and you are welcome.
This is fabulous. Almost drew tears to eyes. This poem illustrates what it means to have a friend, and the lose one feels when that person dies.
Thanks for sharing.
A.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Thank you Audie for that lovely response. All good things.

Chris

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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..

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