Room With A View

sunrise stretches a broad canvas

visible through pristine plate glass

doors that slide open on to a top

floor balcony

slate grey brooding sky mountains

form continents with islands

blending with smooth set apricot

splashes

to form perfect cloud harbours

without a single sail boat in sight

of early morning stillness in half

baked autumn light

a flash of thickened mango crush

adds a tincture of deeper hue

in a sky absent of an ounce of

ocean blue

a hint of gun metal shows two

dolphins taking a leap in imaginary

waters, leaping for joy like children

with a favourite toy

while reality puts seagulls in flight

centre stage in my living art,

entering this frame and departing

in fleeting moments

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

I consider myself extremly blessed that I can see these views from each of my windows. but I couldn't write about them so well. I find this a very moving and musical piece.
PS I realise that this is not Scotland you describe. And I love your descriptions of colour.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Ken. This is Brixham in Devon. I find the light there so uplifting and the cloud movement a source of inspiration. Thank you for stopping by with your encouraging comments.

Chris

[AYVID N]

A play of light and clouds in the sky. You have the gift of words to describe the scene so beautifully, dear Chris. This is indeed a room with a view. A place to marvel at the sunrise. I'm sure the sunset must be equally breathtaking. A wonderful poem!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you a DIVYA. Skyscapes are incredibly beautiful, moving art. Changes shape and colours before your eyes. The ones by the sea, are especially beautiful because of the quality of the light. The views from the cottage where we stayed spectacular. Your kind words are very much appreciated.

Chris

[Emily B]

I can only imagine. It would take my breath away. Lovely words.

[Chris Shaw]

It was certainly beautiful. Thank you Emily for your welcome visit. All the best.

Chris

[duff]

Pristine silent night. Cast away all thoughts for a vacation of not. Beautiful frame. Awesome Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks duff for checking in. Good to have a visit from you. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Davidgeo]

"continents with islands"... I love that.
And that's not all this is good work.

As appreciated as you are you are underappreciated.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you. I certainly appreciate this encouraging review and you checking in to say so.

read moreThank you. I certainly appreciate this encouraging review and you checking in to say so.

Chris

[barleygirl]

Thank you for sharing this awesome aquatic view! Yeah! So vast! I 'specially love your use of interesting colors (((HUGS)))

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Margie. Yes the skyline is vast. Appreciate you checking in.

Chris

[Cherrie Palmer]

Grace of words blend together making this Autumn offering spectacular.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Cherrie, thank you for your lovely review. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Melinda McQueen]

What a lovely picture you have painted here. From the opening of the poem to the ending, you had me there, taking in the scene. Nicely done.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous Melinda, for youriveky review. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Pete]

if that's the view then sign me up.

apricot splashes and mango crush

dolphins and seagulls. quite a canvas you paint with words. great stuff. wow. bravo ... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Pleased you enjoyed the read Pete. Yes, the view was breathtaking on this occasion. Many thanks fir stopping by with your encouragement. You are appreciated..

Chris

[Meenakshi Dutta]

Splendid display of imagery,
U always make small moments seem huge and extraordinary!
Beautiful work chris!
Love,
S

[Chris Shaw]

What a loveky review you have left me. Thank you Jeff.

Chris