Caring

Caring

A Poem by Chris Shaw

for those your heart loves
what greater gift can you give
time is devotion

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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I really like this. Straight to the point. Some are so caught up in what they are doing, they neglect the ones that just need some time with them. It makes me so sad that my brother who lives just four houses from my elderly Mother comes to see her maybe once a week for about ten minutes. It breaks my heart. I don't understand how someone could do that. Time is so important. Thanks for sharing this poem Chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Dear Donna, please forgive my oversight. Better to give thanks late than never. Hope all is good wit.. read more



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sharing presence with love is divine

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you albee for your review. Most appreciated.

Chris
Indeed.
True love must be demonstrated; will turn to action.
Mere verbal declarations simply won't do.
Excellent, Christine of Jolly Ole!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thanks Jimmy. Time for loved ones is top of the list.

Chris
Yes! This poem is so simple, yet wise and true. The best thing we can give is devotion, especially during these times. It's important to make sure everyone is doing alright, and so with that, I love this poem, a great one as always, and I hope you and your loved ones are doing alright. (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Colacat, pleased you enjoyed the read.

Chris
Lovely sensitive and wise senryu. Time is such a precious commodity and it is what makes everything seem good when you give it freely to those you love for and care for.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thanks John for this lovely review. Happy Tuesday.

Chris
simple and lovely Chris, no surprises here.
consider though, time is also life or an important essential of it
i believe time is a privilege of the living souls, so let's cherish it

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Time is life and sometimes that can be forgotten. Many thanks for your visit.

Chris
Nicely done and it is also so true.

Take care - Dave

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Dave. Take care.

Chris
and the long lasting friendships that show a balance, both sides giving....
those are the greatest gifts of all. This is a gem, Chris.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Pleased you like this one Jacob. Thank you.

Chris
Time is indeed the most valuable gift one can give their loved ones. Nothing can replace it or make up for it. Thank you for reminding us of what is really important dear Chris ❤

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhara_Ditzy Kat

4 Years Ago

Furry friends seek love equally, my friend and you look out for us and thats so awesome of you! I lo.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Aw now you are making me blush. Have a lovely kitty kat day Ditzy. Seek out those rats :)
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

4 Years Ago

Will keep going dear Chris :) All energetic and happy after a word from you! Enjoy your day!

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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