Distracted

dancing dust motes
catch sunlight streaming
moving in time
to morning music
they boogie to
New Order
in their own lively
disorder
lifting spirits
revisiting magic

Reviews

[AYVID N]

You wrote so brilliantly on such a basic rhythm of nature, the Brownian Motion.
This haphazard motion is so intrinsic to Nature and all its realms.
Order in disorder indeed, for without the disorder, there would be no evolution, no laws.

Distracted though it may seem, there is such purpose to it!

In such a simple way, you captured all the magic and beauty of creation.

This is just what I love about your poetry so much, dear Chris....

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear DIVYA. You are always so thoughtful and kind about my work. It was my father who had a degree in physics. Alas, not one of my strong points, although I wish it had been. Have a lovely day 🌺

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

The random movement is actually the basis of the beginning of life in the universe itself. There's motion even in lifeless dust! How beautiful the dust looks bouncing in a ray of sun. You worded it perfectly, dear Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Ditzy, fav Kat of mine, I thank you and agree with you. Apart from the scientific nature, there is also great beauty in dust motes flying in sunlight. Thank you and more treats.......

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you my friend. Enjoy your evening.

[alanwgraham]

Great. Our 2 and half grandson continually amazes . He hasn't yet reigned in his sensory world to align with adults norms. Seeing ALL is just too too much. Perhaps as being bipolar I am reverting to childhood wonder. You can read about it my open Manicarus.
Thanks Chris.
Alan

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Alan, I think we all need a bit of childhood wonder every now and then. Have fun with your delightful grandchildren. All good wishes and keep safe.

Chris

[Pete]

a pleasant distraction. very clever and pleasing. i hate to repeat myself but this is the good stuff of life. you've certainly brought a smile to a dreaded household plague i've actually watched dust particles in sunlight as you so elegantly and skillfully describe and thought the same thing. so cool how they float as if suspended in another dimension in time as they fall where we don't want them and cover. personally, i like to listen to music and strut a dance with them when i dust ... :)

you remind me that there is good in everything (a matter of perspective). boogie on chris -

“The true harvest of my daily life is somewhat as intangible and indescribable as the tints of morning or evening. It is a little star-dust caught, a segment of the rainbow which I have clutched.” - Thoreau

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pete, I love your review. It sure helps if you can find some good in the mundane and ordinary. Yes I am a dancer as I dust and do my chores. Have to have music. Thank you for that Thoreau quote. He knew a thing or two about life. Keep safe and well my friend.

Chris

[emmajoy]

Amazing how beautiful dust can appear when someone looks positively instead of thinking vacuum cleaner or duster! The sun and/or a gasp of air can make the all around so very lovely and you saw it, captured its flight, its fairylike float, described it and ~ make lovely poetry, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Em. Caught it at the right moment and it was ideal material for a poem. Making the most of my last night looking across Torbay at all the cruise ships anchored and sparkly bright. Strange times.

[emmajoy]

Have cruise ship off Weymouth too.. part of an armada waiting to strike.. as you say, strange/ So hope you return with some wonderful memories and that the sun shone on you.. has been quite good here lately. About to change, of course! Sweet dreams, hope they revisit happy hours. x

[Chris Shaw]

Sweet dreams to you too Em x

[Jimmy Yetts]

What an image--and metaphorical perspective.
I did so enjoy this gem of minimalism.
Well done, poetess!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jimmy. Pleased you managed to capture in your mind what I saw. Appreciate your visit.
read moreThank you Jimmy. Pleased you managed to capture in your mind what I saw. Appreciate your visit.

Chris

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Oh my God.... Never imagined tyndall effect of physics will be so poetic actually. It reminded me of my childhood winter when a beam of sunrays with dust motes danced in front of my eyes.... And I imgined from where they are coming. .... Thank you so much for this wonderful piece.. You brought me back a precious moment

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[Chris Shaw]

Delighted by your enthusiasm Sima. Pleased to take you to a precious moment. Thank you so much.
read moreDelighted by your enthusiasm Sima. Pleased to take you to a precious moment. Thank you so much.

Chris

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My pleasure... :)

[Ayesha]

"Dust thou art, and unto dust shalt thou return"
Probably this is the reason we humans are so fascinated with dust.
Truly magic.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ayesha. We do have a fascinating with dust don't we? Thank you so much for your visit and your thoughts here. All good wishes.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

all very dreamily enjoyable until 'the OCD vacuum cleaner' enters the arena!

[Chris Shaw]

My vacuum cleaner does not suffer from OCD, Dave:) Your response made me laugh. Thank you.
read moreMy vacuum cleaner does not suffer from OCD, Dave:) Your response made me laugh. Thank you.

Chris