Disturbance at Dawn

Disturbance at Dawn

A Poem by Chris Shaw

comes the mist in early morning
with a swiftness unexpected
as it rolls across the meadows
as it drifts without a purpose
pon the glassy river's surface
where the geese are super noisy
where the ducks are going quackers
where the peace is all but shattered
for the likes of you and me

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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lovely descriptive piece chris.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you John. Have a good day.

Chris
An eerie morning fog casting its presence. Nature quiet broken by beautiful creatures. I can see this as a painting.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Beautiful to look at duff, sometimes too noisy though. Many thanks.

Chris
"the ducks are going quackers" love it.

those early morning mists are somehow so peaceful.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

The mists are peaceful, the wildlife often very noisy. Thank you Jacob.

Chris

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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