A Touch Of Delicious

another river musing

peach melba sunset

embellished with butter cream

has dark night drooling

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is one of the few times I love a single haiku! Usually I feel a sense that what's been said isn't complete, I want more, but here you've nailed the crux of these short Japanese formats . . . making a statement thru imagery with a change of direction for the last line. You've done this perfectly & what you're word painting is truly delicious! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Margie. Believe it or not quite alot of work has to go into these. Pleased you liked the flavour of this one.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

( yummy )

[Chris Shaw]

Peach melba is divine. So was this sunset Dave. Thanks for checking in. Have a great Sunday.

Chris

[Dave]

Mmmmm - I loooove peach melba!

Take care -Dave

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave. Yes it was a very yummy sunset. Glorious colours. Thank you for your continued support of my efforts. Have a good Sunday.

Chris

[Dave]

So often I am chagrinned that I don't have my camera with me to catch the awesome grandure of colors to be found in the setting sun.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not so sure about rivers here Anne but this had me salivating in its fruity, rich creaminess offering. So yes drooling away to this tidy little senryu.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you John, yes it was quite something to see. Have a good Sunday.

Chris