A Touch Of Delicious

another river musing

peach melba sunset

embellished with butter cream

has dark night drooling

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is one of the few times I love a single haiku! Usually I feel a sense that what's been said isn't complete, I want more, but here you've nailed the crux of these short Japanese formats . . . making a statement thru imagery with a change of direction for the last line. You've done this perfectly & what you're word painting is truly delicious! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Margie. Believe it or not quite alot of work has to go into these. Pleased you liked the flavour of this one.

Chris

[light and ashes]

Beautiful and delicious like the best desserts! Succulent and great!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Light and Ashes for your thoughtful review. Much appreciated.

Chris

[light and ashes]

You're welcome

[Richard🖌]

Mm-BOY, Chris 😋

Talk about an array of imaginings, this yummy little Haiku just about churns the butter cream into a nightlong, scrumptiously warm, confection of vividly visual scintillation … sooo many possible lovely double, triple, quadruple, etc; entendres. ; q

I think I hear you giggling again … LOL
Whatever its intent, Dear Chris, I love it! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Richard, so much for your response. Gave me a little smile it did. All good wishes.

Chris

[Just Kim]

powerful imagery here, this is wonderful

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Kym for your thoughts. All the best.

Chris

[Wild Rose]

you are Making my mouth water

[Chris Shaw]

Peach melbas are delicious. A sunset of those colours even better. Thank you Wild Rose.

read morePeach melbas are delicious. A sunset of those colours even better. Thank you Wild Rose.

Chris

[Ladysue]

Oh this was treat in every sense of the word. Heavenly and beautiful..A touch of delicious indeed!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Sue. Yes, love peach melba and that type of sunset is gorgeous. Taje care.
read moreThank you dear Sue. Yes, love peach melba and that type of sunset is gorgeous. Taje care.

Chris

[Ladysue]

yes sunsets and sunrises are memorizing.. :)

[Betty Hermelee]

I love your Haiku! You're using the senses to develop your luscious words. I love the last line as that would be me, drooling over what the daylight has conjured up; nice contrast too. I'm hungry!! Nice Chris!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Betty. Yes good enough to eat it was. Take good care and keep safe

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I want to eat this poem....oops, sorry...i have to remember my Manners!
May i have a spoon, please?

[Chris Shaw]

Spoon coming up Jacob. Help yourself, but save some for me :)
Thank you

Chris

[Fran Marie]

lovely musing s within
this one with a touch
of delicious..an apt
title ..nicely penned

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Fran Marie. All good wishes and keep safe.

Chris