This poem is so beautifully relevant in today's times when most have become so material. Asides from chasing accomplishments, we envy others for the stuff they have and forget to count our loved ones as our biggest blessings. Your words always bring us to great realizations, dear Chris. Thanks for sharing such positivity today.
Posted 3 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Dear DIVYA, an older poem out for an airing. I so appreciate you sharing your thoughts. We sadly do.. read moreDear DIVYA, an older poem out for an airing. I so appreciate you sharing your thoughts. We sadly do live in a materialistic world while many have nothing. Relationships with those we love, all important. Have a good day
Searching for a better life is so common these days…keeping up with the Jones’…… but I think we should all make do with what we have and be proud abs satisfied…. We all need an anchor.. and it’s different for each of us… this is so very true and yet very poignantly written Chis..
Enjoy the rest of your Sunday!
Warmly, B
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you Betty for your balanced and thoughtful review. Sunday was good, hope yours was too. All t.. read moreThank you Betty for your balanced and thoughtful review. Sunday was good, hope yours was too. All the best.
Hi chris. If your son keeps on 24 hrs spending writing his brain cells will not work after some poing becaused he has used them up all. Proper nourishment and food are important for health.
When i saw you you are just under lot of physical pain, which is not even allowing to sleep for 10 mins atleast. Your eyes are dry without moisture even. I need to do reiki for you tk reduce the pain.
People who are having good health are getting worse for what, ?? Atleast for your wife and kids and family take care of your health. I dont know what fun you are getting its just a paischikam demon pleasure but no godly pleasure.
I am here to take care of you.
Jessy jacob.
With love.
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you for your love Jessy. Have a lovely Sunday.
Chris
11 Months Ago
My pleasure and care.
You too have a lovely sunday.
your muse is always present in your poetry, very subtle yet beautiful. i like that you referenced your audience - really brought some community to the poem. wonderful job. -mabel
Posted 11 Months Ago
11 Months Ago
Thank you Mabel for your warm appreciation. Pleased you enjoyed the poem and you mentioned my muse. .. read moreThank you Mabel for your warm appreciation. Pleased you enjoyed the poem and you mentioned my muse. Have a lovely Sunday.
Thank you so much for giving this older poem an airing. I truly appreciate it, as it is one of my pe.. read moreThank you so much for giving this older poem an airing. I truly appreciate it, as it is one of my personal favourites.
Our friends and loved ones, mostly taken for granted, until the day we miss them and wish some seeds had been planted. The anchor that holds us close to those that are dear. Love your poem,
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Really appreciate your kind thoughts DM. Thank you so much.
The embrace of a lost loved one transends all that we can physically hold.
Thanks Chris for this romantic poem.
I hope all's well with you, and Merry Christmas!
Louisa
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you Louisa for your thoughts and visit. Merry Christmas too, to you and your loved ones. read moreThank you Louisa for your thoughts and visit. Merry Christmas too, to you and your loved ones.
Yes, the older we get the less it's about silver and gold.
I don't relish the getting older part, so I'm trying my best to relish the real parts,
and getting hungry with all this talk about relish,
I really enjoyed this one, Chris :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you JD. Pleased you enjoyed this older write of mine . All good wishes .
Chris.. read moreThank you JD. Pleased you enjoyed this older write of mine . All good wishes .
A nice bit of symbolism here. Yes some are not satisfied with their silver looking for the fabled cities of gold. Many relationships end because of this. Yes a safe harbor is above all value. When this type of relationship is found hold on with all your might. Nicely done.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you Soren. I appreciate your visit and your thoughts. All good wishes.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..