Facing Adversity

More river musings

river grass stands tall
unphased by strong winds and rain
resilience shows

Reviews

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I still don't understand what's system of composition for haiku. But this have quiet zen transcend spirit in it. Wind and rain even can be sometimes dangerous for grass but without them grass will die. So we are back again in balance . This really broken my morning into beautiful observation of our world. Thank you and have nice day.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Martin. 17 syllables 5/7/5 over three lines. Not much opportunity to say anything. You have to pare it down to the bone. Appreciating your thoughtful comments.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

The haiku struck me how I once saw entire swathes of trees fallen prostrate on the ground from a cyclone. Grass is so much more resilient!

[Chris Shaw]

So much wisdom in your words Ditzy. How awful to see trees downed like that. Many thanks.
read moreSo much wisdom in your words Ditzy. How awful to see trees downed like that. Many thanks.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

My pleasure, dear Chris!

[Papaya]

Sometimes the most delicate are also the most resilient.
Nicely captured

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ana. Yes, there is much truth in what you say.

Chris

[Dave Brown]

I take this as a testament to the fact that you are thoroughly enjoying your time afloat
Our fields of long grass have been flattened by hammering rain
But, keeps everything green!

[Chris Shaw]

We are having a good break Dave on the river. Plenty for me to observe. Sorry about your fields.
read moreWe are having a good break Dave on the river. Plenty for me to observe. Sorry about your fields.

Chris

[Inessa]

A lovely haiku, Christine. Captured beautifully. I am all for resilience and river grass struggling in the wind and rain is a strong symbol of that word. Wonderfully portrayed. You portray scenery so well with your words.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Inessa for your encouraging review.

Chris

[Jimmy Yetts]

Standing up--under pressure--is a vital ability to possess.
So much of life tests that particular kind of "resilience."
Meaningful poetry, Christine of Berkshire.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jimmy for your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Chris