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Suggestions for a title please

gift me a blade of grass

though not before dawn

has cast her crystal tears

upon its green

gift me a blade of grass

so every droplet glistens

dew bead bright, rainbow lights

kissed gently by the first

touch of morning sun

gift me a blade of grass

and I will have all that my 

heart desires before the 

day is done

 

Reviews

[Lorry]

Cleanse/ cleansed?
Well, it's better than my second thought for a title "Does this smell of dog piss to you?" 😀
A beautiful glimpse into a beautiful mind... that I have just soiled. My head is hung in shame. But you know me Chris, once I thunk it, I have to talk it 😀
Think happy thoughts Chris, throwing shoes never solved anyth OUCH! 😀

[Chris Shaw]

Good job I know you Lorry. Dog piss indeed:)) Sort of takes the beauty away and leaves me with my nose screwed up. You can lift your head up now. You are forgiven. Have a great weekend.

Chris

[Dylan S]

This poem is really touching to me. Being a grateful for such a small thing as a blade of grass makes me appreciate what a big deal it can really be.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dylan for your thoughtful review. Your visit appreciated.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I don't need much...just a beautiful morning.
My suggestion for a title would be "The Morning's Due"

love the imagery in this one, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jacob. Material things are of no consequence. The diamond fell out of my engagement ring. My husband says he will buy another. I am wearing it happily sans the diamond. Thank you my friend.

Chris

[Jimmy Yetts]

You are, unquestionably, a romantic whom Nature continually inspires.
Simply, sublime, gifted poetess!

[Chris Shaw]

You give so much encouragement Jimmy and I need that at times to pick my pen up. Thank you.

Chris

[adornoscousin]

I just got back from a rustic camp site (no plumbing or showers!). This poem reminds me of that. Great poem!

[Chris Shaw]

I hope you had a great trip. That was surely rustic. I've been camping but not without showers or toilets :)) Hope you had good weather. Thank you so much for your encouraging revoiew. Back to nature, what I like best.

Chris

[Archishman Rick]

This is such a lovely piece, Ms. Chris. I whiffed in glee the natural essence of the scenic elements you painted in this write. May you come up with a genuine title :) Regards.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your lovely review. I really appreciate your visit and kind thoughts.

Chris

[Kent Rawski]

Dew visits or dew vistas or dew kisses

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank you Kent for your visit and your suggestions for a title. I appreciate your input. All good wishes

Chris

[MOON]

Lovely ah the blades of grass, lyrical.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Moon. The Blades of Grass might be one I consider. Thanking you for your visit.
read moreThank you Moon. The Blades of Grass might be one I consider. Thanking you for your visit.

Chris

[Ruth]

How beautiful! Nature is such a soothing presence, as asked, I can see a title such as "Dewly" for this piece, just my thoughts :) Stunning write Chris :)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Ruth for your encouraging review and your title suggestion. I appreciate you and your visit.

Chris

[Papaya]

this is a very very beautiful poem
it makes me think of a spring romance
i can see how you might struggle with a title, i am struggling too

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ana. Not sure yet for a title. That doesn't happen to me often. The muse wouldn't help.read moreThank you Ana. Not sure yet for a title. That doesn't happen to me often. The muse wouldn't help.

Chris