Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by Chris Shaw
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River Musings

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lily lays her head
safely in embrace of leaves
floating on water

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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....................................... how very succinct yet hugely superb .. Neville

Posted 11 Months Ago


Chris Shaw

11 Months Ago

Thanks Neville for a lovely review. Makes me think of summer on a bitterly cold day.

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The water lily, one of my favs, beautiful haiku, lovely visuals

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Corset, it truly is a sight to behold. All good wishes.

Chris
You know, of course, your profound creativity has given meaning and beauty to a rather mundane event.
Happy to have witnessed this sublime filtration!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

What a lovely and welcome review. Thank you so much.

Chris
Gentle, beautiful and wonderful words shared. Hello dear Chris and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote. Just a little observation by the river. How nature can inspire us.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Chris.
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bee
Such a soothing image and a piece of heaven indeed.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Dear bee, thank you for your thoughtful review.

Chris
Is this heaven? Do we all have our own personal heavens? Your poem raises interesting points.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you adornoscousin. If I had been a lily, I would have been in a state of bliss. We all have ou.. read more
Such simple words, yet so profoundly beautiful images flow through it ;-]

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Weeping willow. Pleased you enjoyed.

Chris
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I will be maybe also describe colours at this poem. But maybe this can give a freedom to everyone to put own colors . Very intimate poem in embrace of connection in between each layer of one self.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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4 Years Ago

If I can say what I like about London. It will be probably endless evening walks around the water ch.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

That sounds like Maida Vale to me. Not far from Paddington Station. I like the river Thames and the .. read more
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4 Years Ago

Actually i don't remember how this part of London call. I know it was quiet on the edge of the town... read more
Great capture.
A lovely bit of creative staging.
Wonderful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Many thanks Jimmy. Couldn't help myself here. All I saw was a lover's blissful embrace.

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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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