What a beautiful poem. Its sentiment is so genuine. Your sharply defined images, tinnitus, space, our place in the universe, a daughter still joined with her father...like my Making Conversation, this poem is a living remembrance, a memory that celebrates without drifting into the melancholy.
Perfect way to begin my day
Ken e
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you Ken for this lovely thoughtful review. Pleased you enjoyed the read. I have had a very bus.. read moreThank you Ken for this lovely thoughtful review. Pleased you enjoyed the read. I have had a very busy week, so need to catch up. Have a good day.
What a beautiful poem. Its sentiment is so genuine. Your sharply defined images, tinnitus, space, our place in the universe, a daughter still joined with her father...like my Making Conversation, this poem is a living remembrance, a memory that celebrates without drifting into the melancholy.
Perfect way to begin my day
Ken e
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you Ken for this lovely thoughtful review. Pleased you enjoyed the read. I have had a very bus.. read moreThank you Ken for this lovely thoughtful review. Pleased you enjoyed the read. I have had a very busy week, so need to catch up. Have a good day.
Brilliant philosophy… I feel so strongly that our Loved Ones guide our days. There is Peace in knowing we are not Alone. gently, Pat
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thank you dear Pat for visiting this older poem and letting it breathe again. Hope all is OK. I have.. read moreThank you dear Pat for visiting this older poem and letting it breathe again. Hope all is OK. I have had a very busy week, so need to catch up. Sending love across the waves.
This poem is quite clever and well done. I enjoyed reading the story, not that it matters.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Many thank yous WBM for stopping by to read this old poem out for an airing. Have a good weekend.read moreMany thank yous WBM for stopping by to read this old poem out for an airing. Have a good weekend.
Thank you Julie. An older poem out for an airing. Pleased you stopped by.
Chris
2 Years Ago
Love older poems bring some more out plz
One day I’ll look through mine but never enough .. read moreLove older poems bring some more out plz
One day I’ll look through mine but never enough hours lol
... Hey, call me wot ever .. My Dad said something very similar .. and just like them Monkee's once said, I'm a believer ..................... The fact it's all wrapped up in a poem, like this tho' makes it sound so much bloomin better :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thanks Neville :) I'm a believer too and I am quite taken as well with that Monkees song. Get's me .. read moreThanks Neville :) I'm a believer too and I am quite taken as well with that Monkees song. Get's me singing and dancing, it does:)
This is a worthy tribute to your father, cute, honest, and sincere ...
Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Thank you Marvin. I appreciate your thoughts. He was one special guy and clever too. Have a good Thu.. read moreThank you Marvin. I appreciate your thoughts. He was one special guy and clever too. Have a good Thursday.
dear Chris... as Easter is near and buds are breaking out with fresh air and light rain... the Spirits of our loved ones are sending us hope eternal with notes of music 🎶 from a heavenly Choir... Wishing you the best of Blessings...
gently, Pat
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Dear Pat, thank you so much. Sending you all good wishes and blessings for a wonderful Easter. Keep .. read moreDear Pat, thank you so much. Sending you all good wishes and blessings for a wonderful Easter. Keep safe and well.
I don't know why but I do feel that I have some old connection with you... Because two people can't think in the same and similar fashion anyways! You know I lost a dearest friend of mine and whenever I saw her in my dreams I used to think that she wanted to connect with me through dreams, though waking up realising that, that was mere a dream was quite shattering but still it gave me an uncanny feeling! So, I can feel your situation.... It's a way of connection... Much love to you
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Dear Sima, thank you so much for sharing and your much appreciated visit. Your lovely comments so we.. read moreDear Sima, thank you so much for sharing and your much appreciated visit. Your lovely comments so welcome. Muchove.
it is true Chris, specially that "tinnitus" You are speaking about here, it's his voice speaking to You from his dimension, and I am glad You believe in what You believe and don't care about anything or anyone, what's your heart know, it's the truth, and our loved ones connect with us in their own ways knowing we will feel it by heart not by what logic or anyone else says. I feel You dear Chris... Thank You for sharing this, it warms my heart❤️
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Dear lightsong, many thanks for your thoughts. You are appreciated.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..