You painted such a wonderful picture here Chris that I could almost hear it going "whee whee whee" all the way home.
Or is that little piggies? 😀
Now, where's part two, where you follow it like the kid we have to pretend we are not, lest people talk.
And thank you for the opportunity of using lest in a sentence 😀
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Happy to give you that opportunity Lorry. I like the word lest too and of course I recall this littl.. read moreHappy to give you that opportunity Lorry. I like the word lest too and of course I recall this little piggy went to market. This little piggy stayed home :)
This little piggy had roast beef... And this little piggy had none... And this little piggy...... Go.. read moreThis little piggy had roast beef... And this little piggy had none... And this little piggy...... Got executed, sliced up and went inyo the delicious bacon sandwich you had for lunch.
Yes, I remember it too 😀
That wonderful sense of freedom and no automotive upkeep or taxes to pay;
Oh that I may be a leaf
hanging on a limb
free to travel any lane
whenever I've the whim
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Hey look at you Dave, a poem for a response. Way to go and thanks for checking in.
Ch.. read moreHey look at you Dave, a poem for a response. Way to go and thanks for checking in.
the exuberant leaf no longer clinging to the branch ... free at last ... free at last ... yippee ... here I go.
Give me a little breeze and I will dash and dance down the lane.
Perfect image Chris.
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Thanks Ted. Breaking away from the branch, what freedom :) Appreciate you checking in.
.. read moreThanks Ted. Breaking away from the branch, what freedom :) Appreciate you checking in.
Absolutely incredible! Twelve words and you've captured autumn!
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Thank you kindly augustus for your thoughts. I:m delighted at your enthusiasm and your visit.
.. read moreThank you kindly augustus for your thoughts. I:m delighted at your enthusiasm and your visit.
Ha, now that would be a sight for sure. Not sure I'd have the energy to do that now. I used to cartw.. read moreHa, now that would be a sight for sure. Not sure I'd have the energy to do that now. I used to cartwheel, a long time ago. Many thank yous for your visit.
Chris
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A more sedate walk > but that shouldn't stop you thinking of when you could do a cartwheel
You painted such a wonderful picture here Chris that I could almost hear it going "whee whee whee" all the way home.
Or is that little piggies? 😀
Now, where's part two, where you follow it like the kid we have to pretend we are not, lest people talk.
And thank you for the opportunity of using lest in a sentence 😀
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4 Years Ago
Happy to give you that opportunity Lorry. I like the word lest too and of course I recall this littl.. read moreHappy to give you that opportunity Lorry. I like the word lest too and of course I recall this little piggy went to market. This little piggy stayed home :)
This little piggy had roast beef... And this little piggy had none... And this little piggy...... Go.. read moreThis little piggy had roast beef... And this little piggy had none... And this little piggy...... Got executed, sliced up and went inyo the delicious bacon sandwich you had for lunch.
Yes, I remember it too 😀
Oh to be that leaf, Chris... if only. Inspired. thank you. x
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Thank you Em. Oh the freedom, don' you envy that little leaf? Hope all is as good as it can be. read moreThank you Em. Oh the freedom, don' you envy that little leaf? Hope all is as good as it can be.
Even the dull and rain didn't stop me for welcoming the dawn today.. don't know why but somehow.. so.. read moreEven the dull and rain didn't stop me for welcoming the dawn today.. don't know why but somehow.. somehow could see further than the end of my nose!
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That is a start maybe. We all need to travel a bit further. That:s what covid has done to us.
I don't know if I understand but this is for me like return to a nature and harmony what we lost during our dwelling at great towns. It's like you captured one moment of one leaf on your footstep and you feeling how your freedom became more real.
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One little leaf on its own with a huge amount of freedom. Totally capturing a moment in the natural .. read moreOne little leaf on its own with a huge amount of freedom. Totally capturing a moment in the natural environment. Thank you Poet's Act, I really appreciate your thoughts.
Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..